As nobody is touching lewd with a ten foot pole it feels like, I'll do my part to focus on... them, to be generous. It, to be realistic, as only one can be called a story. The other is more a... well, particularly long joke?
[Lewd] Abating Boredom With Beasts
>releasing the fairy's head to roar in fe
I think you accidentally forgot to edit this.
Well... that was both too much and not enough. At first I liked the detail of your descriptions, but then it turned out the story was gory and full to as much of the brim as that poor fairy with torture. I'm a fan of bestiality and a fan of fairies and their like. Even rape isn't outside of my personal fetishes, but that was just plain brutal. There were three ways I would have preferred it to have ended: it turning out to be beyond their ability to control and a bit of turnabout going on, the beast trying to take his mistress for his own and dying, and the poor fairy at least being spared the memory or the like. I'd say more, but your story wasn't my cup of tea. That said, it was well made, and I did enjoy it now and then along the way. Poor fairy...
 Spring has Sprung
I feel this could have been funnier if more effort were put in.
 Blooming Friendship
D'aww. I loved the way that started, and also how it ended. That said, I felt a bit confused about the reason for the beating. It felt like I am to assume the reason, but I find myself second guessing that sort of reasoning, as that is a terrible reason. Seriously, who does that sort of thing? Freaky flower lovers, that's who. Still, jokes aside, I loved that story. It just felt... fae? You know, where you're invited to a dance and vanish for decades, your will subsumed in merriment? But with flowers in this version.
 Message in a Bottle
D'aww. Marisa must have joined the navy at some point, but d'aww. Seriously, I agree with the other guy: swearing is fine, but going overboard is still going overboard. That said, I won't beat you over the head with it, as I know how that feels, getting a million voices telling you things labeled under "shit I already know". Honestly, I was a little sad that Kosuzu wasn't touched on in more than passing, though. Easily a favorite character of mine, and I'm curious just how she turned, as that manga leading into the future is an interesting thought.
 False Moon
 Arachne Wept
I felt it ended well before it could have, and it feels very... "to be continued"ish somehow. I liked the story, but feel it could have been better if it didn't end there. That said, I nearly missed your story due to the lack of picture!
 Rice and Rain
Yet another d'aww. Seriously, just d'aww! Kogasa's a favorite of mine, and if it were more fleshed out, I feel I might have given this my vote. I just love me a snuggly umbrella, and one as sweet as this one, while prone to attracting insects, is just lovely. Nearly missed your story, too.
 The Youkai Are Coming
...I... was giggling quite a lot while reading that. Like, seriously, that was dumb. But good-dumb. I loved everything about the dumbness of it all, and am glad I got to behold it. ...Seriously, were you on something while writing that or something? It was very... fever dream.
[Non-Lewd] Lunar Veil
Wow, lots of Mooninites this time around, huh? Sorry you had to be the only newbie. ...I honestly thought it'd be close between the first two entries, but you really blew my socks off with this one. Like, wow. I don't even really have anything negative to say; your story felt above average even among this category, let alone the newbie one. Hope we see more from you in the future, as I'd love to see what you might produce.