[SHITPOST] Grey Wolf makes a Touhou manga.
...Well, that was a thing. Maybe make more original jokes next time. As it stands, it was fairly unoriginal. I realize there's no category for it, but you deserve it.
[ ] Ragnonymous the Bloodedge.
Titles are very helpful things. That aside, I feel that your banter could use some work. The conversation was good, but the way it was structured was a bit odd. Listing off sentences and listing off replies to them just comes off as odd. It would work better if topics flowed from one to the next, if you ask me.
[PAIRING] Heartfelt Visitation
Wow. The story may not have been the best I've ever read, but the concept is quite a good one. It sticks to the contest's theme well, and doesn't delve into crossovers or retread jokes like most of this category. Sure, Okuu feels a bit too bright — and I don't mean that as in intellect, but vocabulary — but the characters feel like people. The length is also satisfying, which many can't say this time around. You sadly don't get my vote, though this is crack enough for me to say it's my favorite pairing.
[X] Birds of a Feather
I wanted to hate this story. The character's design looks silly at best and donut steel at worst.
But I couldn't. She had a way of worming her
laser blades way into my heart, whoever she might be. Although, I find myself curious... What series or what have you is she from?
[ ] Vermilion-Stained Violet
Ohh, the horror! Someone namefagged! Boohoo, I can't vote for this! ...Or not. I'll just assume it's the title. Moving on, the story is tighter than Yukari most likely is! I quite enjoyed it, broken neck and incontinence and all. Gaps are fun to use in a porn environment, honestly. So exploitable...
Ohh, and Marisa, Reimu and Yukari are from three games in total.
[xXx] Stupid Sexy Sanae
Another one I was expecting to hate and yet loved. Two characters I'm far from a fan of, both of whom I always make sure to spice up any time I use them. This was more than a little hot, honestly. And, heck, I feel there's some untold story here. I expected Sumireko's expectations to be toppled, and yet she seemed fairly spot-on about the slut being strong with this one.
Although, I absolutely love the ending. If only it didn't end, as I totally would read the crap out of it.