-  [WT]  [Home] [Manage]
[Show or hide post box]

[Return] [Entire Thread] [Last 50 posts] [Bottom]
Posting mode: Reply
Name
Email
Subject   (reply to 15446)
Message
File
Password  (for post and file deletion)
  • First time posting? See our frontpage for site rules and FAQ
  • Further overview of board culture in this thread.
  • Supported file types are: GIF, JPG, PNG, WEBM
  • Maximum file size allowed is 4096 KB.
  • Images greater than 200x200 pixels will be thumbnailed.
  • Currently 3937 unique user posts. View catalog

File 149926788932.jpg - (357.37KB , 650x433 , Underground.jpg ) [iqdb]
15446 No. 15446
Hello everyone and welcome to...well my first real story on this site given that the last one was more of a prototype. So welcome to Imperiled Indentured Servant! This story starts with a line I'm sure many have used, someone catches Yukari's eye then she fools around again. But before we get into all that we need to craft our MC. Our MC is a youngish male student living in the outside world in Japan. He starts out as a normal, if somewhat shy, student but as he gets dumped into very different situation (god damn it Yukari) your posts can alter his personality.

Name: Up to you guys

Age: 16ish but if you guys want more shotamoe you can discuss that in the comments and if gets enough people behind it we can hash it out

Personality: A normal and kind, if somewhat shy student but can change with your votes. You want to turn him into a deadpan snarker? Do it!

Body type: A tad short. Likes to keep himself fit by running so normal with the budding signs of a runner's body

Hair: You guys

Eyes: You guys

Hobbies: Mostly up to you guys but he is part of the archery club

Alright one last thing. As you know I threw the stats system out but I'm keeping a reformatted perks system. Every time you guys see one of my stories to the end you will get a list of perks that reflected events in the story and no I'm not telling you guys when you unlock one you only get to see the end result. From that list you get to pick one perk to add to your permanent list of perks and the others are discarded but you can still get them in other stories. Also at the end of each story I will tell you the percent you have built to getting a new perk pick. What percent you ask? Well right now at the start of a story you can pick one perk but every time you finish a story it builds a percent bar (also driven by in story events) till you unlock the ability to pick another peck. So each time you get 100% you can pick +1 perk and the percent resets. As you might have guessed perks are picked at the start of the story IF and ONLY IF we are crafting an MC. However you can still gain perk points and perk pick percent from all my stories so don't let that hold you back.

Also its perk time! From this list pick a perk that you want to add to the permanent list and to use in Imperiled Indentured Servant.

[ ] Haru's legacy: You are an outright god at cooking able to craft Food (yes it does demand capitalization)

[ ] What do you mean they can't talk?: You can understand and communicate with beings that speak without words (Such as Alice's dolls)

[ ] Flower friend: Yuuka's flowers, normally suspicious or outright hostile to most beings, like you at first sight and are very warm and welcoming. WARNING! This pick has a high chance of attracting Yuuka's attention

[ ] King under the sake dish: No oni, no god, no being living or dead can match you in drinking!

So yeah...pick one to add to the list and it will be used in IIS as well. Also another thing to know, some picks have hidden bonuses...yep not gonna tell you what they are or how they work after all they are hidden but just something to keep in mind.

After this all gets voted on and our MC takes shape we can get this story rolling.
Expand all images
>> No. 15447
Name: Daisuke
Age: 15 (I like that number)
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Can we mainly focus on archery? if no, then acting
[X] What do you mean they can't talk?
>> No. 15448
>>15447
I like the way you think.

Name: Daisuke
Age: 15
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Can we mainly focus on archery? if no, then acting
[X] What do you mean they can't talk?
>> No. 15450
File 149929826236.jpg - (78.33KB , 730x1154 , the-gamer-4453415.jpg ) [iqdb]
15450
Name: Daisuke
Age: 16
Hair: short, mousy
Eyes: glasses
Hobbies: Gaming
[X] What do you mean they can't talk?

I'd be interested in seeing a The Gamer type progression model.
>> No. 15451
First of all I need a last name as well guys.

Second, no The Gamer crossovers here
>> No. 15452
Name: Ardjuna Pandawa
Age: 22
Hair: Long, Ponytailed.
Eyes: Sharp Jet black.
Hobbies: Archery. ( If not allowed, then Cooking)
>> No. 15453
Hobbies guys. See the S? He can have more then one XD But given that someone will be 'that guy' who tries to give him 20+ ...lets cap it at 3, you can list 3 hobbies for him to have
>> No. 15454
Name: Daisuke
Age: 15
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Acting, Cooking, Writing
[X] What do you mean they can't talk?
>> No. 15455
Name: Daisuke
Age:16
Hair: Short, black
Eyes: Brown
Perk: Cooking

I'm tempted to make a Shirou clone but I'll back off.
>> No. 15456
Name: Daisuke
Age: 15
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Can we mainly focus on archery? if no, then acting
[X] What do you mean they can't talk?
>> No. 15457
Daisuke Pandawa
Age: 15
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Gaming, Writing, Cooking
[X] Flower friend

I'm tentatively hopeful for this one.
>> No. 15458
[X] Flower friend: Yuuka's flowers, normally suspicious or outright hostile to most beings, like you at first sight and are very warm and welcoming. WARNING! This pick has a high chance of attracting Yuuka's attention
>> No. 15459
Daisuke Pandawa
Age: 15
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Gaming, Writing, Cooking
[X] Haru's legacy
>> No. 15460
Daisuke Pandawa
Age: 15
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Gaming, Writing, Cooking
[X] Flower friend

I like this one.
>> No. 15462
Daisuke Pandawa
Age: 15
Hair: short black pony-tail
Eyes: brown
Hobbies: Gaming, Writing, Cooking
[X] Flower friend
>> No. 15465
Ok so this is the MC so far:

Name: Daisuke Pandawa

Age: 15

Hair: short black pony-tail

Eyes: brown

Hobbies: Acting, Cooking, Writing

Perks: What do you mean they can't talk?

I need two last bits of info guys, first of all does this guy have a nickname? Also he is in the archery club dispite it not being a hobby. Is he there because...

[ ] Force: He has a great deal of natural talent but didn't want a calming pastime to become more then that. However the leader of the team happened to see him shooting one day and is forcing him to take part. Unfortunately the leader's action have killed Daisuke's enjoyment of archery and without a drive behind it his skill has slipped. This has only made the leader push him harder making his desire wilt more and it has slowly spiraled down in a feedback loop

[ ] Mandatory: Everyone has to join a club, so he did. He is middle of the pack and only sees it as checking off a school requirement

[ ] Family: His mother enjoyed archery and taught him how to shoot. He joined the club but found the competitive nature off putting. He is one of the top shooters but even with the urging of his club mates he would rather keep it as a family pastime and nothing more.
>> No. 15466
[X] Family: His mother enjoyed archery and taught him how to shoot. He joined the club but found the competitive nature off putting. He is one of the top shooters but even with the urging of his club mates he would rather keep it as a family pastime and nothing more.
>> No. 15467
[X] Family: His mother enjoyed archery and taught him how to shoot. He joined the club but found the competitive nature off putting. He is one of the top shooters but even with the urging of his club mates he would rather keep it as a family pastime and nothing more.
>> No. 15468
[X] Family
>> No. 15469
[X] Force
He is on the shy side, so this could be about him standing his ground.
>> No. 15470
[X] Family: His mother enjoyed archery and taught him how to shoot. He joined the club but found the competitive nature off putting. He is one of the top shooters but even with the urging of his club mates he would rather keep it as a family pastime and nothing more.
>> No. 15471
Just clarifying: 'Pandawa' is the Java-nese spelling of 'Pandava', which means 'Sons of Pandu' in sanskrit.
>> No. 15472
>>15471
Ok so his family has an odd last name
>> No. 15473
>>15472
You guys picked it not me
>> No. 15474
[X] Family

Ok well here we go! Story start!



“-ke up.”

“...”

“Wake up.”

“...”

“WAKE UP!” You let out a sharp cry of pain as a hand smacks the top of your head, making it bounce off the desk you are dozing on. You hiss in pain as you rub your abused forehead and look at your attacker. A tall girl with long black hair and sharp brown eyes glares down at you and you wilt under her gaze.

“h-hello Yumi.” She snorts.

“I told you call me Tsubaki!” This girl is Tsubaki Yumi the leader (some say tyrant) of the archery club. She is very...intense. She also tends to bully you as she sees your refusal of a place on the competitive team as an affront to her leadership. “Why didn't you show up for practice this morning!?” You wince at her yelling, no doubt the whole school heard her.

“Ahh I was really tired Tsubaki, I really needed some rest and-” You yelp as her hand smashes down on your desk.

“This neglect wouldn't happen if you got more rest!” Well yes but given that she forces you to stay late each day so she can lecture you on the merits of her team and why you are eight kinds of foolish to not join leaving you little time for homework and study and how could you possibly neglect them? ...well not like you would ever say that to her face. You give her a strained smile.

“Look its my birthday, can't you give me a break this one time?” She glares at you with the fury of the sun before snorting.

“Such weakness, I don't know how you would last in competitive archery.”

'Then why do you want me on the team?!' You scream in your mind even as you keep the smile on your face. “I guess I'm just not cut out for it.” 'You know, like I keep telling you?'

“Yet.” Before you can answer she whirls around and stalks out, the action done with such force her long hair whips you in the face. You rub your abused eyes as you hear her stomp down the hallway. “Sigh.” You slump down on your desk even as the sounds of other students slowly fills the area, school will be starting soon...you had hoped to hide here and get some rest but it seems Tsubaki is a bit of a bloodhound when it comes to you. The mental image of you firing the dull archery club arrows at a fleeing Tsubaki drifts in your mind but you quickly dismiss it, there is already a betting pool going on for when you inevitably snap and strangle her with her own bow, no need to add fuel to that fire. Still it doesn't matter becuase you are turning fifteen today! You sit up and stretch as other students trickle in and you pull out a small worn journal like book. In its pages are your mother's day to day thoughts, her random moments of poetry, her musings on many different topics and the like. Each year she fills a thick journal like this starting the day after your birthday, the old journal being one of the gifts she gives you on your special day. She started her journals when she was very young and it was only on your twelfth birthday that she stared giving them to you as well as all the old ones she had made. You are slowly making your way through them and its really cool to see your mother's thoughts as she lives her life. You open up to the page you left off and start to read.

'Kiritsugu approached me today about a job then pretended to trip so he could fall into my chest. He laughed and called me a marshmallow monster. I laughed as well, he is so adorable when he thinks he's being clever.

If he tries that again I'm putting an arrow in his skull'

You sigh, oh mother how you and Kiritsugu argue.

“Good morning!” You start and snap the book shut, it seems class it starting now and-! The cheerful woman standing at the front of the room is not the normal teacher. She has a dark purple dress on with an odd symbol on the right shoulder. She has long golden hair...but its her eyes...those purple orbs seem to be looking into your soul...and you seem to be the only one that noticed this as everyone else is staring at her chest, even the girls! ...ok yes you looked a little but only because they are very...impressive, yes impressive. “I'm Yukari Yakumo and I will taking over for today due to a sudden illness.” Illness? You raise your hand. “Ahh yes?”

“Is Hayashi sensei alright?” She smiles and nods.

“He is, just came down with a cold suddenly.” She shuffles a stack of papers on her desk. “Now given that this was a very sudden thing I didn't have time to really set a lesson plan together.” There is a mild cheer and she smiles coyly. “Yes yes but I do have something for you all to work on, something to get you thinking.” She passes out the paper and you blink as you get your copy, a survey? Yep this is indeed a survey! Just a bunch of questions like 'What type of house would you like to live in?' or 'How do you feel about people different then you?' You write down your answers and everyone else does the same and for a while there is only the sound of students at work. About twenty minutes go by before Yakumo sensei claps her hands. “Alright is everyone finished?” As everyone give her an affirmative she smiles. “Wonderful! How lets start talking about your answers. For the first question who would like to go first?” And so the day went on as such. Before you knew it the day was over and you where slowly sneaking around, trying to get outside without running into Tsubaki, dang it this was your birthday and you were NOT going to stay late today! You had 2 paths you could take...

[ ] Take a side hallway, cut through the archery club itself, then out the main gate. No one would guess you would keep so close to the place and people you want to avoid.

[ ] Take the main hallway, cut through the garden, and out the main gate. Speed is key, get out and away before anyone thinks to look for you
>> No. 15475
[X] Take the main hallway, cut through the garden, and out the main gate. Speed is key, get out and away before anyone thinks to look for you
>> No. 15476
[X] Take a side hallway
Tsubaki is probably expecting us to escape.
>> No. 15477
[X] Take a side hallway, cut through the archery club itself, then out the main gate. No one would guess you would keep so close to the place and people you want to avoid.
>> No. 15478
[X] Take a side hallway, cut through the archery club itself, then out the main gate. No one would guess you would keep so close to the place and people you want to avoid.
>> No. 15479
[X] Take a side hallway, cut through the archery club itself, then out the main gate. No one would guess you would keep so close to the place and people you want to avoid.
>> No. 15480
[X] Take a side hallway, cut through the archery club itself, then out the main gate. No one would guess you would keep so close to the place and people you want to avoid.

You have the perfect idea! You will go full ninja and slip past the club! No will could see that coming! You dart down the side hallway and slowly slip into the archery club and let out a thankful breath, there is no one here. You swiftly make you way out and to the main gate. You are just crossing the property line when an iron clamp snaps around your ear. You cry out in pain as you are pulled backward. “And just were do you think you are going?” Tsubaki glares down at you as her fingers twist your ear making your eyes well up with tears. “You are coming back to the archery club with me right now and-”

“Would you mind telling me what you are doing to my son?” The voice is soft and light but still strikes like the first of an angry goddess. Your mother slowly approaches at her normal relaxed pace with a light smile on her beautiful face. Her eyes are closed as they normally are but you can somehow feel the laser like glare she is hitting Tsubaki with. You would greet her but the pain is such that you can only grit your teeth.

“Do you know how lazy your son has been...” She trails off as your mother gets closer and towers over you both, being almost 6 feet tall its not that hard for her to do...or maybe she is stunned by your mother's...outstanding bust, not even Yakumo sensei can compare to your mother in that regard in fact you doubt any woman can!

“Kindly unhand my son.” The 'or I will break your offending hand' goes unsaid and after a moment of hesitation Tsubaki does so. “Thank you.”

SLAP

You yelp and stumble back as Tsubaki goes sprawling in the dirt. She is still for a few seconds before she slowly stands her teeth grinding. “You...you dare! Do you know who I am!?” Your mother slowly flips her long, very long almost to her knees, jet black hair and regards the fuming girl with an annoyed air. “Do you know who I am?”

“Why would I...” The suddenly sweating girl takes a step back and gulps. “...you...you are Ayako Koizumi!” At your mother's graceful nod Tsubaki whimpers. “P-Please...I...I didn't know he was your son! He has a different family name!”

“First you assume I would not be annoyed by your treatment of any child in such a manner, second your ignorance is not an excuse.” Your mother opens her eyes, brown with a tint of green, and stops smiling. “Run along trash.” The frightened girl runs off as if the devil was behind her and your mother turns to you, her eyes closing and a loving, if troubled smile on her face. “Ahh Daisuke how trouble seem to find you.” You hiccup and she opens her arms wide. “Oh little Dai-chan.” You let her pull you into a hug and grin up at her as she wipes your tear stained face.

“Mother~” You mock protest. “Your boobs are crushing me!” She giggles and ruffles your hair before giving you the little pout...oh gods no not the little pout! “Mom~” She giggles again.

“I can't help it if my son is so cute.” She sets you down and you walk beside her as she starts for home. “Mmm...” She taps her chin with a finger. “Just how long have you been having trouble with that girl?”

“Who Tsubaki?” You rub the back of your neck. “Not that long...she is the leader of the archery club and...well she really wants me to join the competitive team.”

“Is that so?” You give her a worried look as she grows thoughtful.

“I-Its ok mom, I can handle it.” She gives you a look and you wilt.

“My little Dai-chan.” She sighs and ruffles your hair again. “I know you feel your must earn your family name but that doesn't mean you have to face your problems alone.”

“But I...” You sigh and nod, she is right after all. “I just...”

“You want me to be proud of you.” She boops your nose and giggles at you. “I'm already proud of you son.” She leans down and kisses your forehead. “You don't need to earn your rightful family name, you don't need to feel you need to make up for your father's actions.” You yelp as she swoops you up in her arms. “Are you not the son I carried inside me?” She sinks your face in her chest and laughs as you squirm. “Are you not the little one that suckled from my chest-”

“Alright alright I get just stop suffocating me!” She giggles but lets you down again and goes to outright laughter at your blushing face. “Hey...” She looks at you as you fidget. “You won't do anything to Tsubaki right? She is just doing what she feels is right.” Your mother sighs, muttering something under her breath but nods. “I know you feel I'm being too nice for my own good but I can handle it.” She nods and the two of you walk on in warm silence before something pops up in your mind. “Mother?”

“Yes?” You try to construct the best way to ask this in your mind.

“Uhh...well...just...why do you want me to take your name so badly? I mean I want to you know this but...I was just wondering why?” She smiles and ruffles your hair again.

“Oh? I never told you? Well maybe after your birthday ok?” You nod and smile brightly as you take her hand and the two of you finish your walk home in warm, loving silence.

Why does she want you to change your name so badly?

[ ] No reason aside from symbolism, she wants the two of you to open a new chapter in your lives and this is a good way to start that...as for why people are scared of her, well she could buy this town 10 times over...she just doesn't want to. (The story will be only about Daisuke)

[ ] Unknown to you your mother is quite well known in the world of the yakuza as the Iron Empress. Your 'father' was nothing more then a crafty sperm donor that tried to use his new connection to your mother to steal her thunder. Many people in her organization, annoyed at serving a woman, supported him and your mother ended up killing your father and having her loyal subject purge the rebels in her ranks. She wants you to take her name so you take your rightful place at her side...and totally not so she can properly introduce you to her all female personal guard who have spent the last few years fangirling over you (The much beloved son of the Iron Empress ends up somehow stolen and according to the Empress youkai are responsible! ...the empress and her subjects are not happy oh not happy at all)

No I have no idea where the yakuza came from, I warned you my stories have a life of their own. I was just typing and the story goes “Hey you know what would be a cool idea? If Daisuke's mother was yakuza!' ...and suddenly it was there...oh well I'll let the votes speak as always XD
>> No. 15481
[X] Unknown to you your mother is quite well known in the world of the yakuza as the Iron Empress.

When given the opportunity to add complications, people generally will.
>> No. 15482
[X] No reason aside from symbolism

Not that it wouldn't be interesting otherwise, it seems that the story would focus on the mother too much.
>> No. 15483
[X] Unknown to you your mother is quite well known in the world of the yakuza as the Iron Empress.
>> No. 15484
[X] Unknown to you, your mother is quite well known in the world of the yakuza as the Iron Empress.
On a scale of 1 to 10, how hard is he going to loose his innocence?
>> No. 15485
>>15484
If/When and who he loses it too is 100% up to you guys as I said I don't care how NSFW my work gets
>> No. 15486
[X] Unknown to you your mother is quite well known in the world of the yakuza as the Iron Empress.
>> No. 15487
[X] Unknown to you your mother is quite well known in the world of the yakuza as the Iron Empress.

Murder ma'am momma
>> No. 15492
[X] Unknown to you your mother is quite well known in the world of the yakuza as the Iron Empress.

“Well...sure I can wait I guess.” She ruffles your hair a bit as you both approach your home. “This may sound silly...but I always like coming home.” Your mother chuckles lightly.

“Not at all...in fact I feel much the same.” You take a moment to look over your home. Its a nice place with a small stone wall sounding the property. To reach the house you go through a gate and walk through a garden up to the house itself. The place is a kind of big for just you, the few servants, and your mother after all there is enough room for ten people. From what your mother tells you it used to be an inn that was run by your great grandmother. Even if its days as an inn are behind it it still works as a lovely home even if it is a bit lonely. You spot a dark shape in the garden and wave to it.

“Kaori!” The shape pauses its work and waves back to the both of you before returning to her gardening. “I wish she would take a day off once in a while...”

“Now now” Your mother chides you softly as you walk through the garden. “You know Kaori takes her garden very seriously. Remember what happened that time I ordered her to take time off?” You wince, the poor woman was so at a loss for what to do she couldn't keep still. To this day no one knows what happened to Kaori to make her so obsessed with the garden...well you think mother does but you respect Kaori far to much to go behind her back like that, if you really want to know you will ask her yourself...if you could ever work up the courage that is. You both walk into your home and you take a moment to stretch, man its great to be back! Your mother walks over to a side door and opens it before speaking with someone inside...ahh it must be Aiko. Your mother has a lot of servants but for some reason they (aside from Kaori...no you don't know understand that either) are never allowed to interact with you at all...you don't really understand why but its what your mother wants and that's all the reason you need. “ Dai-chan~” You look up at your mother as she smiles down at you. “Aiko prepared a meal for us.” You go very still...oh...no.

(Time skip: About one hour later...)

“Uhhg.” You sit at the table...so...very...stuffed. That is the problem when Aiko cooks, she is outstandingly good but she only has two settings, light snack or feast fit for the round-table and the food is so dang good you just can't stand to waste it! You weakly reach for another plate but your mother pushes it out of reach.

“Now now that's enough.” You give her a teary eyed look and she gives you a ruffle as well as a sigh. “I can guess what you want.” You nod with a hopeful look, the servants are not supposed to eat with you and your mother unless invited and given that they are not to be around you...yeah not happening. The problem is that this rule extends to any food that was made for you and your mother as well. At your pleading look your mother sighs with a light smile. “Aiko.” There is a soft sound by a side door. “I need to tend to my son...he wishes for the servants of house to indulge in our meal...as I was not here to see the rules being broken...who can say if they were...am I understood?”

“Yes mistress.” Aiko's stern, powerful voice answers her.

“Good.” Your mother lifts you up and carries you to your room. “You know you can't keep indulging them like this.”

“Why not?” She nuzzles you cheek to cheek and you giggle.

“They might want you for themselves!” Her giggles join yours as she sets you down in your room. “Now as you know I have an important meeting with the servants tonight so you have to go to bed soon.” You nod, other children might have complained but you have long come to terms with your odd family. At your nod she smiles and pats your head. “Thank you for understanding. Most of your gifts will have to wait till morning...but I do have one for you right now.” She reaches into her dress and pulls out a small black book that you take with no small amount of awe, the next part of her daily journals! “Now don't stay up all night reading it.” You nod and place the book on your nightstand. “Oh? Not going to start it at all?”

“I won't be able to put it down!” She laughs and tucks you in.

“I have such a smart son.” You preen under her praise as she kisses you on the forehead. “Goodnight Dai-chan.”

“Goodnight mother.” The lights go off and you snuggle under the covers...









…!

…What? You slowly blink awake...wait...why are you in your school uniform...you changed last night-! You slowly look around at your surroundings...eyes...eyes everywhere... “N-Nightmare!”

“Nope~” You whirl around at the sudden voice to find-

“Yakumo sensei?” Yes it is Yakumo sensei with someone else standing beside her...only now something seems...off about the substitute teacher...

“I'm glad you remember me Daisuke.” She smiles and you shudder. “Oh don't be like that I'm not going to hurt you~” She flicks out a fan and covers the lower half of her face with it. “In fact I have a wonderful opportunity for you!” You hear the woman beside her sigh and you glance at the figure-! ...a...a kitsune! “Pay attention Daisuke~” Yukari smirks at you. “After all what I say might save your life.”

[ ] Hear Yukari out

[ ] Freak out

[ ] ...but...but Kitsune!
>> No. 15493
[X] ...but...but Kitsune!
>> No. 15494
[X] Freak out

Let's see.
We wake up in a very strange and scary place that doesn't make any sense.
The substitute teacher we only met once appears and basically tells to listen to her or our life will be in danger.
There's a youkai right next to her.
And it's pretty obvious they've kidnapped us.
Haha, NOPE!
>> No. 15495
[X] ...but...but Kitsune!

I'm not sure if this is leading to culturally correct Japanese freakout or touch fluffy tail, but either is good.
>> No. 15496
>>15495
A bit of both really
>> No. 15498
[X] ...but...but Kitsune!

touch fluffy tails
>> No. 15501
[X] ...but...but Kitsune!

i want to die in these fluffy tails
>> No. 15505
File 150042384486.png - (131.81KB , 480x272 , BcgVOQxCYAARkq4.png ) [iqdb]
15505
[X] ...but...but Kitsune!

She has nine tails! Nine, fluffy, tails! That's as many as three times three. And that's terrible.

Terribly cute! And she's all like wisdom and mystic and Tamamo no Mae
>> No. 15506
[X] Freak out

Pretty much what >>15494 said.
>> No. 15507
[X] ...but...but Kitsune!
>> No. 15508
[X] ...but...but Kitsune!

You blink as your mind catches up to what you are seeing. “K-Kitsune!” You take a step back as Yukari blinks at you in confusion.

“Uhh...yes...but remember life saving inform-”

“What have you done to Yakumo sensei you fox youkai!?” Yukari seems to be stunned and the fox takes the moment to step forward, her tails fanning out around her.

“Fu fu fu~” You take another step back and the fox matches you. “Why so scared little one?~” You glare at her even as your body shakes in fear.

“You can't trick me, I know plenty about kitsune!” You point at her face and try to stop your hand from shaking. “I know your kind is a bunch of tricksters and masters of illusion! You appear as beautiful humans to trick and mislead people and because you are so beautiful that only makes you that much more dangerous!” The fox stops at your words and you blink as she starts to shudder. You are shocked when a light blush dusts her cheeks.

“Maa Daisuke thinks I am beautiful~” You blink for a second then start to panic.

“N-No that wasn't what I meant! Kitsune get stronger with age and you have 9 tails so-”

“Maa Daisuke you little deviant, setting your sights on older women~”

“S-Stop doing that!” She gives you a bright smile.

“Do what?” You stamp your foot in frustration.

“Stop twisting what I say!” You give her your most fiercest of glares. She wiggles and hide her face behind her sleeve.

“Ahh~ If you keep giving me such a heated gaze...I won't be able to get married anymore~” Your jaw drops and for a second you just sit there.

“Stop that!” She 'Fu Fus' behind her sleeve as you windmill your arms in anger. “Release Yakumo sensei and send me back to my house!”

“Oh?” She puts her arm down and gives you an amused smirk. “You think you can order me?” You grit your teeth and slowly shake your head.

“...no...but!” You get into a fighting stance. “I don't care how outclassed I am I won't abandon Yakumo sensei to you!” You give her a glare as you try to ignore the trembling of your body. “This is you last warning!”

“Oh? And if I ignore that warning?”

“Then...I will...be forced to stop you and save Yakumo sensei!” She smiles and gives you a 'come at me' wave. “Ok then I warned you!” You charge at the fox youkai and strike at her but a tail (...so soft) snags your limb! “H-Hey! Let go!” You grab the tail wrapping your arm (soft!) and try to pull it off you but more and more tails start ensnaring you. You struggle helplessly as the tails lift you up to her eye level and she smiles at you.

“A good effort little one~” You snarl at her as you fight the golden fur (soft) enfolding you.

“I won't give up!” She chuckles and combs her claws gently through your hair. “H-Hey stop that!” She starts humming and you try to fight the warm sensations. “This is...cheating...” She 'Fu Fus' again and only responds by rubbing your body with her tails. In your hazy state you reach out and pet the closest bit of fur. “....soft.” As you start to drift off to sleep the fox leans down and brushes her lips on your ear.

“Welcome to Gensokyo little one~”







You sit up with a start, the hazy veil of sleep broken by mild panic. You whip your head around...ok good...no fox...no...eyes...just a normal everyday unknown room...wait what. You take a slower look around this time. You are in a comfy room with a bed, (that you a laying on) a desk with a lamp on it, and three doors. You get up and after a bit of exploring you find the two of the doors lead to a bathroom and a closet with the last door leading out into a hallway. You move back to the bed and sit before putting your head in your hands, just what is going on?! The sit there in silence as you try to make heads or tails of what fate has befallen you. You don't know how much time as passed when you hear someone outside your door and a loud knocking.

“Hey human! You up yet?” You blink, human? “Too late I'm coming in~” The door opens and a girl with a black and green dress with red hair steps into the room...wait...are those...cat...ears? “Hi!” You shake your head and give the smiling girl a weak smile.

“H-Hello.” Something seems to have displeased her as she frowns.

“Don't tell me...you have no idea where you are or why you are here?” You blink up at her with sad eyes and nod making the girl mutter something under her breath. “Well that's really not my place to go into detail about...but if are willing to follow me I can take you to someone who can explain things.” You nod and stand up, following the girl has she leads you down the hallway. You walk behind her nervously tugging on you collar now and then...then you notice it...tails! A pair of black tails swish behind your guide. Your eyes follow the hypnotic moments that match her stride as she walks boldly down the- “Enjoying the view?” You start and look up to find her gazing over her shoulder at you half amused half annoyed.

“Ahh sorry sorry I just...”

“Ahh...you just what?” You fidget for a few seconds as you try to assemble a good response.

“Well...your tails...are...nice.” Damn it brain! She blinks then the annoyance melts off her face as a wide smirk replaces it.

“Oh?~” She puts a swing in her hips that inflames your face. “I think I'm going to like the new pet~” If you were not so flustered you might have caught her words better. The two of you walk in silence, the cat girl adding a seductive sway to her walk, and you doing everything in your power to ignore it. After a hallway that seemed far too long thanks to the highly amused cat you arrive in a large room that reminds you of the tea room back at the inn. “Go on then, the Master is waiting for you~” She gives you a friendly pat on the back before vanishing back down the hallway. You move into the room and head to the table..and find the Master. Sitting at the table with a cup of tea before her and a second across from her is a girl with pink hair in blue dress...and...tubes? Yes some kind of tubing running from her body to something you can't see in her lap. What are you thoughts on this girl?

[ ] You are just so lost...you hope she can help you

[ ] You on are guard, this girl is most likely a youkai

[ ] You are wary but you want to be polite

[ ] You feel your face flush but you just can't help it...so looks...so pretty...and noble...like a ruler of old

Outside world report:

Time passed since abduction: Very little

Abduction status: Undiscovered

Koizumi clan status: Business as usual
>> No. 15509
[X] You on are guard, this girl is most likely a youkai
>> No. 15510
[x] You on are guard, this girl is most likely a youkai

Protect ya neck
>> No. 15511
[x] You on are guard, this girl is most likely a youkai
>> No. 15512
[X] You feel your face flush but you just can't help it...so looks...so pretty...and noble...like a ruler of old
>> No. 15515
[x] You feel your face flush but you just can't help it...so looks...so pretty...and noble...like a ruler of old

Adorable!

Also, I loved how he pretty much ignored Yukari. I guess that, when he finds out she's a youkai too, she'll go all like 'So you're the kitsune's subordinate!'
[Return] [Entire Thread] [Last 50 posts] [Top]


[Delete or report post]
Delete post []
Password  
Report post
Reason  


Exit Mobile View