Whoever and wherever you are, if you're not planning on completing/updating your stories then this is your thread. Curious ex-readers can ask about what never was, what could've been and everything in between.
>>23160 THOUGH I GUESS THE TWEEEST IN THE ALICE ONE WASN'T THAT EVERYONE WAS GOING TO DIE, BUT RATHER THAT THEY ALREADY HAD AND ALICE WAS ALL ALONE AND MAKING DOLLS OF ALL THE OTHER 2HUS SO SHE COULD HAVE FRIENDS AND IT WASN'T WORKING
Akyuu was dying and knew it was her last incarnation (because Shiki told her), so she disappeared along with her young successor to avoid public scrutiny until she had a good chance to announce what was happening.
MC #1 had a one-sided grudge against Akyuu and was hellbent on tracking her down. She was also slowing being eaten alive by a ball of misfortune.
MC #2 knew about MC #1's ball of misfortune and was supposed to trail her in hopes of finding a way of alleviating it. There probably would have been more to it, but I never came up with anything else.
Both MCs were hated by everyone for various reasons and would have created disasters wherever they went while they chased Akyuu.
Protip: If you're starting out, keep your plot simple and don't have a billion perspective switches. Also, actually have a plot in mind before you start.