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198302 No. 198302
// Formerly known as GreaterYakani.

A curtain lifts.

---- CHINA GROVE ----
---- Select Arc ----

[_] Kannapolis Arc
[_] China Grove Arc
[X] Concord Arc (locked)
[X] Charlotte Arc (locked)
[X] ?????? (locked)

// Votes will close 48 hours after the time of this post.
// (Selection Type: Linear Selection)
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>> No. 198303
// It will also close when an option is first to five, that or 48 hours pass, whichever goes faster.
>> No. 198308
[X] Kannapolis Arc
Seems to be the first arc.
>> No. 198309
[o] China Grove Arc
>> No. 198319
Vote closed... will write update either today or tomorrow...

~ Kurzov
>> No. 198325
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198325
>> [1] - Kannapolis Arc
[1] - China Grove Arc

--------------------------------------------

// Here we go

It was a normal Saturday morning. You've already brushed your teeth and got dressed. Before you walk out, you can hear someone grumbling. "...Why am I here... again..." You walk out to the living room in curiosity. When you get there, you see a girl sitting on your couch, she's wearing an over the top hat, and a blue dress.

What do you respond with?

[_] "Hm?"
[_] "Who are you?"
[_] ___ WRITE ___ IN ____
>> No. 198327
Vote will close in 48 hours, like before.
>> No. 198336
[X] Write in
[X] How did you get in here!?
>> No. 198338
[X] Write in
[X] How did you get in here!?
>> No. 198339
Vote closed.

Will hopefully get the update out later today, I have a lot of things to get done...

~ Kurzov
>> No. 198340
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198340
>> Only responses were "How did you get in here!?"

----

// Got my braces off today, feeling rather good

"Wait, wait, wait... how did you get in here!?" You questioned, hoping for an answer. She took a long time to answer, but eventually, she did. "Sorry. I... don't have an answer for you... I know the basics on how I got here, but I can't remember any specifics who sent me here. I don't remember anything from my past, either..." The girl explained. "You are?" She asked. "Name's Robert. Rob for short." You replied. "Mima." The girl then said, brushing through her odd lime-colored hair. "No way to get back, no sukima, nothing..." Mima muttered.

[_] Ask Mima something.
> [_] About 'sukima'?
> [_] About going back... to where?
> [_] Anything else you could tell me?
> [_] (Write-In)
// Pick one of the above in conjunction with a vote for one of the below.
[_] Go somewhere.
> [_] Park
> [_] Store
> [_] Cafe
[_] Stay home. An early lunch, perhaps?
>> No. 198341
[X] Ask Mima something.
> [X] About 'sukima'?
> [X] About going back... to where?
> [X] Anything else you could tell me?
>> No. 198342
>>198340
[X] Ask Mima something.
[X] "Mima? Sounds a bit foreign. Where are you from?

I like the multi arcs you're going for, and how you expanded the write in to make flow easier, but I notice you don't seem to be descriptive about the setting. Other then that, I'm interested to see where this story will go!
>> No. 198352
Vote closed.

Hopefully, I'll be able to get it out today. If not, I'll get it out tomorrow.

~ Kurzov
>> No. 198353
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198353
[2] - "Mima? Sounds foreign... where are you from?"
[1] - "Sukima"?
[1] - "Anything else you could tell me?"

----

// I have nothing to say

"Mima, eh? Sounds foreign... Where ya' from?" You asked. Mima was slow to respond, but she did so. "Place called Gensokyo. Don't remember much of it at all, like I said, I don't remember much of my past." Mima answered. "So... what was that 'sukima' thing you were muttering about?" You next questioned. "Sukima, sukima, sukima... boundary. Her name is Yakumo... and that's all I remember." Mima replied. "Is there like... any other things I should know about you?" "Nothing that I can remember..." Mima said glumly.

Mima sat for a moment. "Change the subject?" You asked. "Yeah, sure." Mima answered, and you gladly did so. "Well, my friend's having a party tonight, wanna go?" "Sure thing!"

...A few hours later...

You've arrived at the party. What do you want to do?

[_] Have a drink (or two)
[_] Talk with some friends
[_] Play some games

Also, do you want Mima to come along with you?

[_] Yes
[_] No
>> No. 198360
[X] Talk with some friends

"Well, my friend's having a party tonight, wanna go?" "Sure thing!"

Looks like she coming anyway so... [X] Yes
>> No. 198370
Vote closed. Even with one player, we will still go on...!
>> No. 198373
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198373
// SELECT ONE OF THREE
// [0] Have a drink (or two)
>> [1] Talk with your friends
// [0] Play some gaems
// SELECT ONE OF TWO
>> [1] Mima: Yes
// [0] Mima: No

----

// Delayed the closure of voting by a day to see if anybody else would vote, but I guess there was none. I suppose that it's just me and you, Anon - although there's nothing wrong with that if you asked me.

You and Mima enter the party house, and there's things going on all over the place. Some are playing games, some are getting drunk, and some are just conversing with each other. You make a beeline for the latter.

The people already there greet you with smiles. "Hey Rob! See you got yourself a..." One person trails, noticing Mima. That person got a pretty serious glare from Mima, from what you could see. "No, not at the moment." You responded soon after. "So, how's the show going?" A different person asked another. The man in the blue suit responded, "Network's being a pain, but it's going alright." A woman got out of her seat and brought over two additional seats. "There you go." She responded.

You and Mima sat in the chairs, as Mima thanked the person that brought the seats. "The one in the blue suit is Tom, orange jacket is Allen, that guy that looks drunk is Ralph, the girl that brought the seats over is Allison, and the guy that's sitting in front of the fireplace is who we call Scott." You explain, whispering in Mima's ear.

Scott soon brings up the newly entered Mima. "She got a name?" He asks casually. "Name's Mima. I've got no clue how she got in my house. She doesn't know either." You answer. "Well, that's a storrr..." Ralph replies, his head now lying sideways on the table. "C'mon Ralphy, wake up." Allison says. "So, Rob," Allen asks, "how's your work been going?"

----
Where do you work?

[_] Grocery store cashier
[_] Cubicle worker
[_] Janitor
[_] Cook
[_] (Write-In)
>> No. 198385
Anybody voting?
>> No. 198386
[X] Cubicle worker

This story needs some love...
>> No. 198413
Vote closed. ETA unknown.
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