[x] Take in the rain for a bit. Feel its wetness and how the ground becomes soft between your toes and why it smells so good.
[x] Puddle jumping!
It’s kind of loud, too, filling the field with the noise of the water hitting the flowers on its way down to the ground. Not a bad sound. It’s louder than the wind and the insects, though, so that’s all you can hear now.
…hmm. The ground’s getting more wet. Not the stuff right underneath you, but the stuff around you. It was already soft from last night, you think, so now it’s starting to form little pools and things. You splash around a bit, taking care not to step into the sunflowers. It’s fun, but a little boring being so careful. You wonder what kinds of things you could splash in the forest~
Not that you can go there. Well, not that part at least. Maybe there’s something better in this field? You decide to go walking in the squishy mud.
It’s really big. On one side, you see more flowers. They aren’t sunflowers, but they spread out all the way back to that mountain you saw before. On another, the forest. On another, grass. Lots of grass that goes out into the distance, over hills and stuff. On another… hmm. More sunflowers? No, that doesn’t make any sense. But they really do seem to go on forever.
[ ] Keep going. They can’t go on forever, can they?
[ ] You’ll be fine in the forest, if you don’t go to the part where the humans always look. Wander around.
[ ] Where does the grass go to? Maybe there’s something behind one of those hills.
[ ] Maybe you’ll play with those humans, after all…?
[ ] Go exploring somewhere else (write-in).
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>>15984 (from the last thread)
It was started, in the beginning, to see if I could actually write without plot. So, I've been trying different things. Comments like this let me know that what I'm doing isn't working, and that I should change something. So thanks for the input.
How long ago did it get boring? Or has it always been that way? It'll be easier to fix if I know why.
And, as for SCIENCE... I'll get to it. I'll have to restart it in some form or another, though. Second chapter was badly planned without any long-term goals, so it's not really in a usable state. I'm totally open for restarting one of those two, though. Just not right now. I can't really write two things at once, and I'm really enjoying this.
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No. 15998
[B] Keep going. They can’t go on forever, can they? |
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No. 16000
[x] Keep going. They can’t go on forever, can they? |
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No. 16001
[X] Keep going. They can’t go on forever, can they? |
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No. 16002
>>15995 |
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No. 16004
Oh, and, to answer your question, Klaymen: |
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No. 16006
>How long ago did it get boring? |
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No. 16010
[X] Go exploring the lake |
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No. 16012
[X] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. They might be interesting. |
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No. 16016
[X] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. They might be interesting. |
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No. 16018
[X] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. They might be interesting. |
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No. 16022
File 12457347308.jpg- (68.27KB , 635x517 , 81a0cf65c15cd51d3c07e5c9f1fe2407.jpg ) [iqdb] ![]() [x] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. They might be interesting. |
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No. 16031
[X] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. They might be interesting. |
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No. 16034
[ze] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. They might be interesting. |
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No. 16043
>>16004 |
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No. 16044
>>16004 |
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No. 16048
[x] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. |
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No. 16076
>>16049 |
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No. 16077
To quote George Carlin, there are no innocent victims, if you live on this planet, you're guitly, period, fuck you, end of report, next case. |
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No. 16079
File 124578831097.jpg- (121.75KB , 600x800 , 651463-sikieiki_yamaxanadu_181_super.jpg ) [iqdb] ![]() >>16077 |
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No. 16083
[x] Wander off towards the river and those red things in the distance. They might be interesting. |
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No. 16084
[X] Well, it doesn’t really matter. What else is here? |
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No. 16085
[X] Watch from a distance. |
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No. 16087
[X] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16089
[x] Hey, look! There's something shiny on her belt. If you could just get it loose... maybe you should use your teeth? |
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No. 16093
[B] Wake her up and ask her. |
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No. 16099
[x] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16100
[X] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16103
[X] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16104
[X] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16108
[ze] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16109
[X] Get in close and look |
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No. 16110
[X] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16112
[x] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16113
File 124583349581.jpg- (123.92KB , 350x1050 , 1222721953004.jpg ) [iqdb] ![]() [x] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16115
[X] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16117
[x] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16118
[x] Get in close and look. |
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No. 16119
[x] Introductions first. That’s how you do this, right? |
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No. 16122
[ ] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16123
[B] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16124
[X] Introductions first. That’s how you do this, right? |
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No. 16128
[x] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16129
[x] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16139
[x] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16167
[x] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16169
[x] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16170
[x] Her first question was kind of strange. Ask her about it. |
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No. 16171
[X] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16172
[x] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16173
[X] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16179
[x] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16191
[x] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16194
[x] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16221
[x] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16223
[X] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16224
>[X] Get Billy May's autograph. |
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No. 16226
>>16224 |
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No. 16228
[X] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16229
[X] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16232
[X] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16258
[x] Sure, you’ll stay around. |
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No. 16261
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16269
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16270
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16271
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16273
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16278
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16280
[~] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16281
[B] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16287
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16293
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16297
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16303
[X] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16304
[ODIN] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16308
[x] You have good stories, though! |
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No. 16309
[X] After the story, you’ll go look for it. Maybe Komachi will come too. |
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No. 16311
[X] After the story, you’ll go look for it. Maybe Komachi will come too. |
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No. 16312
>>[ ] Not important. Just a ghost. There should be ghosts here. |
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No. 16316
[X] After the story, you’ll go look for it. Maybe Komachi will come too. |
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No. 16320
[X] After the story, you’ll go look for it. Maybe Komachi will come too. |
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No. 16322
[ze] Point that thing out to her. She didn’t notice it. |
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No. 16327
[x] After the story, you’ll go look for it. Maybe Komachi will come too. |
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No. 16333
No update today. I'm really not feeling up to it, since I feel like crap. I'll shoot for updating tomorrow, though. |
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No. 16385
[x] After the story, you’ll go look for it. Maybe Komachi will come too. |
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No. 16386
[X] Hide and seek, but with two seekers and one hider. Start looking in good hiding spots. |
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No. 16388
[X] Hide and seek, but with two seekers and one hider. Start looking in good hiding spots. |
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No. 16394
[x] Hide and seek, but with two seekers and one hider. Start looking in good hiding spots. |
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No. 16395
[ ] Hide and seek, but with two seekers and one hider. Start looking in good hiding spots. |
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No. 16396
[X] Hide and seek, but with two seekers and one hider. Start looking in good hiding spots. |
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No. 16398
[ ] It’s a ghost though, right? So maybe it went up. Check the air. |
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No. 16399
[x] If you could follow its footprints, that would be great. But do ghosts have footprints? |
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No. 16414
[ze] It’s a ghost though, right? So maybe it went up. Check the air. |
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No. 16415
[X] Hide and seek, but with two seekers and one hider. Start looking in good hiding spots. |
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No. 16417
[x] Hide and seek, but with two seekers and one hider. Start looking in good hiding spots. |
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No. 16423
[X] Well, just a little bit... |
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No. 16426
[x] Cheat? No. Keep looking like you are. |
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No. 16429
[ ] Cheat? No. Maybe if you split up, though, it would be easier…? |
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No. 16430
[X] Well, just a little bit... |
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No. 16431
>>16430 |
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No. 16433
>>16430 |
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No. 16443
[x] "But... cheating is bad." Right? |
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No. 16445
[x] "But... cheating is bad." Right? |
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No. 16446
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16447
[X] Well, you are. So no cheating. |
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No. 16448
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16449
[ ] Well, you are. So no cheating. |
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No. 16450
[X] Well, you are. So no cheating. |
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No. 16453
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16454
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16455
[X] Well, you are. So no cheating. |
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No. 16456
[B] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16457
[X] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16458
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16462
[X] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16463
I love this story, but just reading through a bunch of the responses reminds me why I hope nobody here ever has kids. |
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No. 16466
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16467
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16468
>>16450 |
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No. 16469
>>16468 |
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No. 16476
[x] Well, you can’t cheat if there’s no game… can you? That makes sense. So it’s fine. |
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No. 16477
[x] That... was really cool. You wonder what her other tricks could be? |
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No. 16478
[x] Another person stronger than you. Sigh. |
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No. 16479
[X] Another person stronger than you. Sigh. |
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No. 16480
[ ] Another person stronger than you. Sigh. |
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No. 16481
[x] That... was really cool. You wonder what her other tricks could be? |
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No. 16482
[x] Another person stronger than you. Sigh. |
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No. 16483
[X] Another person stronger than you. Sigh. |
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No. 16484
[z] Another person stronger than you. Sigh. |
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No. 16507
[x] Another person stronger than you. Sigh. |
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No. 16508
[ ] Must be a ghost power. Ask Komachi if she can do anything. |
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No. 16510
[X] No, that can’t be right. Where is it? It must have zipped away again. |
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No. 16511
[x] No, that can’t be right. Where is it? It must have zipped away again. |
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No. 16512
[x] Must be a ghost power. Ask Komachi if she can do anything. |
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No. 16519
[x] Must be a ghost power. Ask Komachi if she can do anything. |
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No. 16534
[x] Maybe your power could somehow affect or be affecting things? Try turning it on or off. |
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No. 16537
[x] No, that can’t be right. Where is it? It must have zipped away again. |
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No. 16540
[x] Make a pouty-face. |
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No. 16543
[x] Must be a ghost power. Ask Komachi if she can do anything. |
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No. 16545
[X] Ask it what being dead is like. Keine said you shouldn't kill people, maybe the ghost can tell you why. |
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No. 16546
[x] Hmm… now what? Why was it important? |
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No. 16561
[x] "Is there any way i can bring him back to life? I do not understand why, but his father seemed really sad that i ate him. Maybe he will play more with me if i can bring him back." |
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No. 16562
[X] To the ghost: "Thanks for the meal!" |
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No. 16565
[x] Ask when he can come back. Keine said he would. |
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No. 16566
>>16562 |
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No. 16568
[X] To the ghost: "Thanks for the meal!" |
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No. 16570
[x] To the ghost: "Thanks for the meal!" |
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No. 16571
Are we trying to take the reformed good girl route or the crazy maneater route? |
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No. 16576
[x] To the ghost: "Thanks for the meal!" |
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No. 16581
[x] To the ghost: "Thanks for the meal! Let's play again when you come back!" |
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No. 16582
[x] To the ghost: "Thanks for the meal! Let's play again when you come back!" |
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No. 16588
No update today, since I'm feeling pretty dead. Mild insomnia last night and stuff. Expect one tomorrow. |
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No. 16604
[x] To the ghost: "Thanks for the meal!" |
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No. 16607
>Are we trying to take the reformed good girl route or the crazy maneater route? |
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No. 16608
>Are we trying to take the reformed good girl route or the crazy maneater route? |
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No. 16609
>“And that hiding thing. I should have been able to see him.” She lets out a big sigh. “Well, whatever.” |
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No. 16611
[ ] You don’t really feel like sticking around here. Maybe you’ll go exploring…(writefag’s pick) |
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No. 16612
>How about just a maneater route? Why does Phobe need to be crazy to do something that is completely normal for her race? |
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No. 16615
It's natural for them but most youkai don't do it because humans and youkai have to coexist. If they all went around eating humans then it would make it rather difficult for the coexisting to take place, since there would be no co to exist with. |
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No. 16618
[X] Wait! One last thing… |
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No. 16619
[X] Wait! One last thing… |
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No. 16620
[X] Wait! One last thing… |
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No. 16627
[x] Wait! One last thing… |
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No. 16628
[X] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16629
[~] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16630
[ ] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16631
[X] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16632
[X] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16633
>>16615 |
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No. 16634
[X] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16635
[x] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16636
>>16633 |
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No. 16637
[x] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16638
[ze] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16639
>>16633 |
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No. 16640
Stop arguing. This is a fanmade CYOA and Touhou canon is like meant to be like rubber, not a brick wall. |
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No. 16641
File 124734403644.jpg- (106.72KB , 640x480 , end07c.jpg ) [iqdb] ![]() >>16639 |
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No. 16642
[x] I like exploring, but I have to lay low today. |
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No. 16643
[x] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16645
[X] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16646
[x] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16647
[x] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16648
[X] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16649
[X] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16650
[x] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16651
File 124737977659.png- (188.14KB , 916x990 , Komachigrin.png ) [iqdb] ![]() [x] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16658
[x] Ask why there aren't any people here. Are humans and youkai afraid of things like ghosts and lightning and stuff? |
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No. 16659
[x] Think a little bit more. Maybe you’ll come up with something good. |
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No. 16660
[X] Think a little bit more. Maybe you’ll come up with something good. |
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No. 16661
[X] Try making scary danmaku, on your own. |
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No. 16662
[x] Think a little bit more. Maybe you’ll come up with something good. |
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No. 16664
[x] Think a little bit more. Maybe you’ll come up with something good. |
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No. 16670
[x] Think a little bit more. Maybe you’ll come up with something good. |
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No. 16674
[z] Think a little bit more. Maybe you’ll come up with something good. |
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No. 16681
[ ] Try making scary danmaku, on your own. |