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Warning: Thread started by guy who has never posted on any imageboard on his life. If you absolutely can´t stand new faces, and all the troubles they cause when joining in, please ignore the existance of this thread and move on, or, if you deem neccesary, report and delete it.
Still there? Fine.
I stumbled across this site quite recently, and browsing at it´s stories, I figured I wanted some of the fun too, and with that, the writing started. It´s been a while since I grabbed a pen to do something that could be passed as creative, so probably it will come out somewhat tacky. Apologies in advance.
All that cleared up, lets begin. CYOA made by new guy, titled: Hybrid.

It finally happened. You met a girl, fooled yourself into thinking you had fallen in love, and screwed it up. And now, alone again as you were in the beginning, Cupid, that little brat with wings, shoots, no, stabs you from the back with its arrows. And suddenly, the most important thing in your life becomes finding her, and begging your everything to her until you are forgiven.

Right now, you feel like nothing but an idiot. You knew better than this. You thought you did. How could you fall into such an obvious story? All those years, saying to yourself you didn´t really care being the loner, that it was just the effect of your obliviousness around them, and now? Were you so different as those you loathed? She put the most faith unto you, and you betrayed her.

No. You were not the same, and you would prove it. You might have lost her trust, her love, she might have just forgotten you ever existed, but now, you were going to get it all back. Even if that meant getting killed, or worse, for all you knew. Your objective now was finding her, and pursuing her to the end of the world if you had to.

Altough, honestly, you had just got to the end of the world already.

Got yourself in? Well now, you are getting out. And in order to do just that, you need to...

-Check your...
[]Inventory
[]Surroundings
[]Screw that, you´ll check both.

-Go...
[]North
[]South
[]East
[]West
[]Up?

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First tip: If you need to start your thread with this
>If you absolutely can´t stand new faces, and all the troubles they cause when joining in, please ignore the existance of this thread and move on, or, if you deem neccesary, report and delete it.
It's probably not a good sign.
No. 130129
[x] Rewrite the thread.
No. 130131
>>130129
Sounds good.
You don't start a new story like this. Maybe if you start humble.
>If you absolutely can´t stand new faces, and all the troubles they cause when joining in
We have nothing against new people. You will be loved, liked or hated by the Quality of your writing. And your character.

Choosing a good starting Picture is good too.
No. 130138
So, then... Is there any way to edit that part?
No. 130140
>>130138

Nope. Just nuke the thread, and start over. Spend some time working on your intro, it's the lead in for the entire story that follows, so you want it to be good. Like anon mentioned, a good starter image helps a lot too. A picture that associates with the gist of your story is great.

Other then that, welcome to touhou-project! Fresh blood is BEST BLOOD

SO TASTY