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I've been going through the archive, but I'm having trouble finding a CYOA with a yukari route.

anyone know of a good one?

No. 6790
Try SLDT's /shrine/ story.
No. 6791
The recommendations thread is over on page 1. With the glacial pace of this site, you have absolutely no excuse in making this shitty thread. Delete it and go bump that one.
No. 6794
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Yukari is the cause not the goal.
People don't where they ask why.

What a shame.
No. 6950
>Yukari route
>scraggaly old hag, whom no matter how she is written is always dislikable as a character
Son, the only way that a Yukari route would work is if:
A. You pull of her route like its saya no uta or Arc's route from tsukihime.
B.The MC is an all-powerfull childish being that is happy, and chaotic. Fun things relieve those from boredom, thus, if you are fun, Yukari will be following you lovestruck, constantly trying to push your buttons to get her daily fix of happiness.
No. 6951
>>6950

>B.The MC is an all-powerfull childish being that is happy, and chaotic. Fun things relieve those from boredom, thus, if you are fun, Yukari will be following you lovestruck, constantly trying to push your buttons to get her daily fix of happiness.

I wouldn't believe it if it wasn't happening.

Wade pimping every day.
No. 6952
>>6951
Holy fuck I'm all for this. But do we even have western comics fans in here?
No. 6954
>>6951
Deadpool and Yukari?
Holy fish, that's a dream team!
No. 6955
>>6951
Yeah he is a complete Gary Stu and God Mode Sue right?
No. 6956
>>6954
Can Yukari see the little yellow boxes?
No. 6957
>>6955
Comics heroes are always Gary Tsu. Batman? GARY TSU. Superman? GARY TSU.
No. 6958
>>6957
Batman and Superman do have weaknesses. Besides Batman trained extensively, and from what I remember wasn't the Gary Stu he is now in the beginning.

Wade on the other hand did not extensively train his abilities over many months or years. In fact considering he couldn't even really remember his dream experiences, I'm surprised at how easily he was able to use his abilities, along with being able to learn how to use those abilities so fast and extensively. He also was able to take on one of the Watatsuki sisters and fight her to a draw. Only a few weeks earlier, he was a normal human who didn't have the ability to shapeshift. He was pretty much on Yukari's level without the level of training or experience.

I also got irritated that the author used his character as a mouthpiece several times. Seriously is he David Weber or Terry Goodkind? The worst thing to have in any story is any hint of your characters being a mouthpiece to lecture the reader. Ayn Rand is another horrible example of this with John Galt.
No. 6959
I also forgot, but I also consider Wade a Gary Stu considering how many characters liked him. Seriously practically everyone liked him, and if they didn't, like Patchouli, obviously they were mean and wrong.
No. 6963
Whoever the character, if he can beat a watatsuki alone, then he's a cheater, and if he can beat them both, then it's a Gary Tsu.
No. 6967
>>6963

Well Wade didn't beat one of the Watatsuki's more like fought to a standstill and took himself out to take her out.

And he was out longer than she was.
No. 6968
Flat Yukari looks pretty good.
I will imagine her like this from now on.
No. 6976
>>6968
That isn't flat.
No. 7006
>>6956

She can EDIT the little yellow boxes.

See... there's this man, with a typewriter... and Yukari peeking over his shoulder.
No. 7008
>>7006

She can even do that?!.....Damn.
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>>7008
I don't know about you, but I feel eyes on my back whenever I'm writing a Yukari section in my CYOAs, which makes me double-check to see if it really fits her mystique.

It makes writing smut about her all the more uncomfortable, though.