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4173 No. 4173
Pick a character. I'll write a one shot about them. I'll keep doing until I become satisfied. I need to broaden my thoughts on a few characters and basically sharpen some edges. Also, ideas.

[ ] Yamame
[ ] Kogasa
[ ] Tenshi
[ ] Suwako

No. 4174
[x] Tenshi
No. 4175
[x] Yamame
No. 4176
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[X] Tenshi
No. 4177
[x] Yamame

I love Kogasa, but there isn't enough Yamame.
No. 4178
[x] Tenshi
But not masochist Tenshi. Do something original.
No. 4179
[Q] Tenshi
No. 4180
[x] Suwako
No. 4181
[ ] Not Kogasa
No. 4182
[X] Yamame

Yamame never gets any love. Sadly.
No. 4183
[X] Yamame
No. 4184
[X] Yamame
No. 4185
[X] Tenshi
We just had a Yamame one during the write-off.
No. 4186
[x] Yamame
No. 4187
[X] Tenshi
No. 4188
Well damn, the votes are tied between Yamame and Tenshi...

Well. I'll just have to write both then, now won't I? I'll start with Yamame because it was the first vote.
No. 4189
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"Oh dear..."

That's the first thing you hear when you seemingly come to. You feel like you've been out cold for weeks. This is the last time you decide to explore a bit underground. You got yourself caught in a massive spider web and you haven't been able to free yourself since. You've just been waiting for the massive spider to come along and tear your guts out, but the silly thing is; it never came. You cursed your luck when you realized this, because you thought you would just starve to death on the massive web. But now, luck is now shining it's warm light upon you, for you've been discovered!

"Are you awake?" The girl's voice says. She's rather small looking, maybe just a child. She wears an interesting looking dress, as if her skirt contains something large, but you can't be sure. But you don't care, help is help.

"H-Hey." You speak back to her. "Can...can you get me outta here?" The little girl curiously tilts her head up at you.

"Hmm, I don't know...that's awfully big spider web you got yourself stuck into, mister."

"Yeah, I know! J-Just please, I-I really need help..." Your voice studders from the weakness of being down here for so long. The little girl approaches you and attempts to free your leg, but to no avail. She then looks up at you worriedly.

"Sorry mister, but I don't think I could get you out alone." You have to grunt in frustration at this concept. The only time you get help and they're too little to be of any immediate use. But that's okay, you've been discovered at least.

"Then...then could you go out and find someone who can then? I don't care, anyone will do..." The little girl smiles brightly at the thought of being able to help you.

"Of course! Wait right there and I'll be right back!" You can't help but constantly thank the girl over and over again as she runs off into the darkness ahead of you.

And now, you are alone again. You can feel your stomach trying to eat itself from your starvation. Your hydration is weakening too, your throat feels so immeasurably dry. Your exhaustion takes it's toll on you and you seem to blank out yet again.

"Mister~! I'm back!" You're greeted by a familiar voice when you try and come to again. The little girl must've brought help. You immediately try to focus your eyes and shout out to her.

"Ah! Th-Thank you! Now please, ge-..." You freeze with fear and shock when you can see what's in front of you. The little girl's dress is demolished, ripped in pieces, exposing her bare legs...all six of them.

"Hehe, reactions like that are always priceless~" The little girl says as she approaches you. You try and wriggle yourself free, but like always, it's a futile effort, only more so now because of your weakened state. The two human legs leading up to her torso do the walking while the four, hairy, gigantic arachne legs spilling out of the sides of her hips seem to wave and claw towards you unnervingly. The bottom two then plant themselves in the ground and lift the girl up so that she can be face to face with you.

"Wh-What are you?!" You can't help but shout, just before the girl puts her hands across her cheeks.

"Who do you think, silly? This is my web. I haven't bothered checking in a while because I thought it was old, but I can see my silk is still as strong as ever." Close up and personal, you can now see the two fangs poking out of her mouth, especially as she licks her lips, caressing your cheeks as if searching for tenderness.

"Y-...You don't want to eat me. I'm nothing but bones! I haven't eaten in days!" The girl just looks at you, like it doesn't even matter.

"Then you should be able to understand quite clearly that a meal is a meal, right? Accept the fact that you're my prey~" The girl starts laughing while you struggle more and more, the fear is starting to get the best of you. You stop though when you feel the extra two, free floating spider legs starting to lightly run up your body.

"Wha...what are...you going to do...?" The little girl smirks, shortly before the two legs reach your abdominal area.

"I'm going to teach you a little lesson before you die, mister. You know, a person fears a spider's bite more then anything else. But, they fail to notice something..." Suddenly, you feel a very sharp and blinding pain enter the right side of your torso as one of her legs literally digs into you, burning, singing with a powerful toxin.

"GAAAHHH!!!" You shake and shiver in pain, unable to really take it, the most you can make out with your vision is the girl smiling more devilishly.

"A spider's fangs aren't it's only weapon..." Another claw rips into you, from the other side, causing you to scream out. You can barely make out the next few words out of your excruciating pain and misery. "A spider's claws can be just as deadly..."

Thanks for the meal~
No. 4190
not what I was expecting at all!
No. 4191
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"Geez Reimu! You never let me do anything!"

That was the sound of a young celestial type girl, with long blue hair, and a very stylish dress. She liked having things go her way, and acted childish when they didn't. Despite her practically royal status, she was an immature girl at heart.

"Hey! Come back here! Are you going to run crying?!" Although it was something she tried her hardest not to do, there were still rare times where the little angel that could, just couldn't.

"Gah, I'm so angry! I wanna blow something up! She's so dense sometimes, I wish I could pop that damn skull off her shoulders..."

She was also somewhat destructive at times, not really caring much for other people's belongings.

Her name is Tenshi Hinanai. Having merely been inducted as a celestial through her family, rather then being a true one, her very human-like behavior was of course, to be expected. Some angels would in fact argue that she isn't celestial at all. She still wielded great power, however, power that she loved showing off. Lately, however, times have been difficult for her. Maybe she is coming of age and learning the true plight of humans as they grow into adults.

"Siiigh...I wish Reimu wouldn't be so cold." The little divine girl says, atop a lonely cliff in the sky. She would often wander about, playing through the clouds. When she was still a little girl, the clouds were her favourite play toy, which ended up growing into a mysterious power later on. "Great...now I'm bored again."

It's at this time, that one of her friends, a messenger that went by the name of Iku Nagae, happens to come across Tenshi.

"Oh! Tenshi, what are you doing up here?" The celestial nearly jumps out of her skin, somehow being approached by the woman without any sort of notice. She then hops back to her feet and quickly about faces.

"I-I-Iku! Don't sneak up on me like that!"

"Ahh...sorry?" Iku clearly doesn't seem very concerned about her frightening of the child, as she continues on all the while. "Is something the matter, though?" Tenshi looks at her friend with a bit of a pout before calmly looking off to the side.

"No. Not at all." Iku just sighs at this wonderful display of hiding the truth. The little angel always wore her emotions on her sleeve, and Iku had all but gotten used to this by now.

"You know there is no need to lie in front of me, tell me what happened and I will try my best to rectify the problem." Tenshi looks up at Iku for a moment to judge this situation, and then try to tell her, but of course, she very well can't and has to look away in shame as she tells the messenger her problem.

"I just had another fight with Reimu is all...I don't even remember what it was about. But she...makes me so angry." Iku starts laughing a bit suddenly, which Tenshi takes offense too. "D-Don't laugh!" Iku covers her mouth and tries the stifle the next few bursts of laughter.

"P-Please forgive me~" After calming down, the gentle dancer looks down at her celestial peer. "But perhaps you should go and apologize to her? If you have forgotten about it by now, perhaps she has too."

"That's very unlikely. This is Reimu we're talking about." Iku bends down a little to look at the angel at eye level, putting her hands on her shoulders.

"Yes, and that's exactly why you should go apologize to her." Iku just receives a rather unamused glare from Tenshi, but as much as she can see her guilt trips, she always falls for them.

"Fine, fine. I'll head on my way there now then." Iku smiles as she stands back up.

"That's the spirit. Do your best~!" The exasperated celestial just sighs and takes off, leaving the messenger there for her own duties to fulfill once more.

The blue haired girl wanders about though, instead of going straight to the shrine. Eventually she stops in a clearing in the forest. She looks down, and starts to seriously think about things.

"What's wrong with me? Has celestial life really bored me to the point to where I always feel irritable?"

You're nothing but a human, celestial life would be too good for you!

"Wh-Wha?! Who's there?!"

You're no angel, you're just a human given special rights. There's nothing celestial about you!

"No, no! You're wrong!" The poor girl starts holding her head when the voices that seemingly boom in from out of nowhere start laughing at her. "S-Stop this!"

Who died and made you boss? Oh, that's right, it was that poor excuse for a good you served!

Bad Celestials deserve no place in heaven! Be gone from this plane and never set foot on it again!

People like you are specifically why we have fallen angels. Go back to the dirty soil you once walked on!

Tenshi could hardly take it anymore, falling to her knees, holding her head, trying her best not to cry, but ultimately failing it as tears start running down the once rosy red cheeks of hers. Her immaturity was not due to her age, not due to her human heritage, but her sheltered life living in a place where she did not belong, that was her biggest hurdle, a hurdle she had yet to truly jump.

"S-Stop, please! No more, I don't care about your stupid heaven! Just leave me alone!!"

Do you think we'll give you the time of day after what you've done?

Foolish celestials like you deserve to be punished!

Your whole clan is a disgrace to us!

It is because of your family that we have to live with terrible reputations placed upon our heads! Repent for what you've done!!


The girl's eyes shoot open the moment she hears that familiar voice.


It's okay. Don't listen to them. We may only have been granted special permission, but they fail to see why the Nai-no-Kami had chosen us.


Things will be alright, just watch. One day, the Hinanai clan will be respectable celestials...and I'm sure it will be you who proudly leads them on to victory.

"Daddy...oh Daddy..." Tenshi starts sniffling, trying to clear up her cry. Tears more and more continue to stream down her face though.

Tenshi...Tenshi, what are you doing...?

Tenshi opens her eyes and notices a change in the voice calling out to her, upon looking up, she finds Reimu just now kneeling down to her.

"Jeez Tenshi, what are you doing out here crying like this? I swear, you're so hopeless sometimes..." The shrine maiden pulls out a handkerchief from her pocket and starts wiping the tears off Tenshi's cheeks. "Come on, don't take things so seriously, okay? Let's go back." Reimu is caught by surprise when Tenshi randomly decides to lean into her, giving her a tight embrace. At least, it was random to Reimu. To Tenshi though, it was far from that. It was a thankful gesture for one of the few people that was always there for her, and who reminded her every day of her true heritage, and that one day, she will carry it on proud and strong. As head of the celestial Hinanai clan.



[ ] Kogasa
[ ] Suwako
[ ] Sunny Milk
[ ] Lunasa
No. 4192
[X] Sunny Milk
No. 4193
milky sun
No. 4194
[x] Suwako
No. 4195
[x] Lunasa
No. 4196
[x] Lunasa
No. 4198
[X] Sunny Milk
No. 4199
[X] Sunny Milk

It's gonna be a bright, bright, sunshiny day!
No. 4200
[ ] Sunny Milk
No. 4201
[x] Suwako
No. 4202
[x]Spoiled Milk
No. 4203
[x] Suwako
No. 4206
[T] Lunasa
No. 4207
[x] Sunny Milk
No. 4208
[B] Sunny Milk
No. 4209
No. 4211
I need a day off or two to get things done, and possibly get my act together a little. Expect a lengthy Sunny Milk one shot when I come back.
No. 4223
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Why not all three
No. 4224

This faptastic picture depresses me, because I've been trying to find an uncensored version for ages, to no avail.
No. 4225
Dude, it's from Japan. They're legally required to censor everything pornographic. If you see something uncensored from Japan, it's one of three things:
1) illegal
2) purchased by a Western company, who used the uncensored master copy
3) had the censoring removed (from the censored version of the image) by a fan, which is generally against the artist's wishes
No. 4226
Last I heard, they haven't been legally required to do that bullshit for years now.

Which means that they censor out of tradition, proving once again that no matter how retarded a thing is, the Japanese will follow it rigidly if they believe it's the traditional way and/or they're supposed to do it that way.
No. 4229
From http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_in_Japan :
"The most recent trial based on this law, the first in 20 years, was the conviction of Suwa Yuuji in January 2004 for his hentai manga Misshitsu. He was originally fined 500,000 yen and avoided jail time by pleading guilty. When he appealed the case to the Supreme Court of Japan on arguments that the manga was not as indecent and explicit as much material on the Internet and that Article 175 violated the Japanese Constitution's protection of freedom of expression, the Court upheld the ruling, and fine was tripled to 1.5 million yen."

So yeah, suffice it to say that pornography censorship is still required by law in Japan. The degree of censorship enforced has been relaxed somewhat (pubic hair is no longer deemed obscene, which it was up until a decade or so ago), which is what gives rise to drawings of giant, gaping vaginas with a teensy black bar over the clitoris, but it still has to be there.
No. 4237
Gosh, did I say a couple days at most? I'm so sorry.

Life got really busy, I had to start going places, and now I'm neck deep in things I need to get done or otherwise people will start strangling me thinking I'm a deadbeat, which you all must think of me as by now. In other words, things happened.

Hopefully I'll get to writing about the fairies soon enough, though it might still be a while. Since the story involves Sunny, of course it'll involve the other two as well, but it'll be told from Sunny's perspective. So yeah.
No. 4240
Out of character.... but interesting.
No. 4243
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Ah...I started writing on this and was pumped for the beginning, but the more and more I wrote, the more I started realizing this story...sucked. As much as I like the fairies, these depictions of them is bland, dull and flat. After a while, I couldn't do it anymore. My own writing started giving me bad vibes. It's like the whole deal with the Kogasa short I wrote; maybe I'm just not cut out for it or something. Here's what I got down though since I'd rather not totally disappoint.


Ah! Rise and shine! Another bright and beautiful day! You hop out of the top bunk of your bed and land squarely on your feet. Score! Not like you couldn't save yourself if you took a nasty fall anyways.

Looking into the other two beds, you seem to be late in your endeavor of waking up. How unfortunate! Being the last to wake up is not productive to your skills as a leader. You must correct this right away.

You quickly skip to the bathroom nearby to do your usual morning tidying up, standing in front of the sink and the mirror above it. Hey, even when you've just gotten out of bed, you are the stunning image of cute and pretty. No time to admire yourself though, your peers are waiting for you! A quick brush of the teeth, washing of the face, and combing of the hair later, you think you've cleaned up nicely enough for now. No time for a bath of course, you must get ready for the task of the day! Hastily grabbing your hair bobbles, you affix your hair up into two little tails on both sides of your head and smile at yourself in the mirror. Perfect!

Running back into the bedroom and over to the drawers, you realize that the time of washing all the clothes has befallen you. You were the one designated to do it this week, but you've been putting it off for a couple days. But now is not the time. You'll do it some other time, for now, the time of awakening is, uhh...now! You sift through some clothes quickly and get yourself a clean skirt and shirt you need for the upcoming day. It's a bit wrinkled but that's easily covered up for now. It's unsightly but time is of the essence! Even great leaders like you need to make sacrifices for the effort of saving time.

You rush out of the bedroom, now finally prepared, and stop in the kitchen, and there they are, your two precious friends!

"You're late."

Luna is already eating breakfast. Star had just finished serving herself. The black haired fairy smiles over at you.

"Oh, Sunny~ Just in time, would you like breakfast?"

"Of course I would!" You shout out, trying to overcome Luna's unamused presence in the room. You think you did a good job. "A-Anyways, I'm not THAT late."

"We've been up for over an hour trying to get you out of bed." Luna says back at you, as you sit in your chair. You're not about to give her the honor of a real response though. You're bigger then that. You just give you a quick tongue sticking out and that's that. So mature.

"It's still bright and early, so no worries." You hear Star say, as she introduces you to your breakfast. "You still remember our plans for today, right?"

"Huh? O-Oh, yeah! Of course. Why would I forget?" Truth be told, you're not particularly of a memorizing mood right now, but you think the delectable food in front of you will fix that.

"That's good~" Star goes ahead and sits herself down after saying that. "It is a very important day for us, and we should make it very memorable." You get the feeling Luna was saying something after that, but you weren't listening as you were too busy engrossed in your delicious food. In fact, it's not long after that it's done.

"Ahh~" You breathe out, sitting back in your chair. Oh man, that was amazing. "Thanks for the food...~" Star mildly giggles at your silliness. But that's right! Today is a day of great importance! And that is because...uhh...what was it again?

"Sunny..." You blink for a moment, interrupting your train of thought to look across the table and over at Luna, who called out your name. "You do remember why today is important, right?" Uh oh, busted. No matter, you'll find a way out of this, your pride as a leader is at stake here!

"I-I do! Today is very important, of course." With that, you stand up, a proud fist in the air. "And to celebrate such an important day, we're going to really pull the non-existent pants over that shrine maiden's head! It'll be the biggest prank yet!"

"Sounds great! The perfect way to spend the day." Star says, marking it as a good idea. You knew she would, she's smart and sensible. Just like you are. Luna on the other hand, seems skeptical.

"...right. Well, regardless of whether or not you remember, pranking the shrine maiden is always worth it. So what's the plan?" You have to think about it for a moment. Of course, since today is apparently very important, the prank itself has to be big. Very big. But what?


I should probably stick to what I know. I'll still post any one shots I get ideas for in this thread though, it's always good to have one laying around just in case. Sorta like the whole steam room thing, except even more blatant plagiarism. Hopefully I'll get an update to the /youkai/ story tomorrow. Can't necessarily count on border since I'm still rather busy. All in all, I'm so very sorry.
No. 6368
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I'm going to make this my general "shorts" thread now outside of my smutty antics in /at/ so to start this revival, I'm going to post this one here.



Rin's been looming over that desk for a while now. You had one put in your room because Rin had requested it. She wanted to get into writing and drawing for some reason. You guess it's the influence from that one woman who is constantly at your heels like a loan shark. She's lent you so many utilities from the outside world, including this desk, you just know she's going to demand repayment sooner or later. Rin seems to be having trouble with it though, for some reason.

"...Rin. What's wrong?"

"I can't think of anything to write. There's just no inspiration..." Rin looks like she's really troubled by this as you approach. Indeed, her paper is blank and empty, clean as the slate of a newborn. You suppose helping your dear lover out would be prudent.

"Well, some of the best writers take inspiration from events around them. After all, if you write about what you know, then it'll be easier for people to connect to it."

"Huh...you're right Satoshi! Good thinking!" Just like that, Rin starts eagerly getting to work. You didn't think it would be that easy.

...actually, no, you're starting to regret what you just said now.

"R-Rin, what are you writing?"

"Hehehe, take a look!"

"Jeez, where did she go...?" You say to yourself as you walk around your house. It's easy to lose someone who's so small, apparently. Then again, she can make herself small enough to be stepped on too...

"KYAH!!!" A fact that makes itself known when you nearly step on something and fall to the floor in a haphazard and clumsy way. As your chin meets the bottom painfully you spy your prey whizzing out from under you and under the bed. You've had about all you can stand with this girl.

"Dammit! Urgh...get out from under there!"

"No! You're a big meanie face!" A big...what, is she some sort of child or something? You can understand why someone would want you to put her in someone else's care.

"What did you just-..." You stop for a moment. You spy the girl's tail poking out from under the bed. This is your chance. You quickly grab hold of it before it can escape your sights.

"Eek!" The girl squeals out as you grasp what is probably a rather tender spot for her, but you're not about to let her get away from you this time. You pull her out, tail and all, revealing the dark gray dress and short hair she bears, with both legs spread out to both sides quite comically. Her big, floppy ears spring up from under the bed as you pull her out all the way. As amusing as this is, you're not quite pleased with her right now.

"Okay Nazrin. Are you going to take a bath now?" The girl just crosses her arms and looks away, without really changing her position.

"Nope. Poopie heads like you shouldn't be listened to."

"W-Wha-..." You're impressed by the level of childishness this girl is displaying, quite honestly. You can't really take it anymore. It's take to make a stand. "Urrgh. Listen, you're going to wash yourself whether you like it or not!"

"Kyah! Let go of me you bad man! Don't touch me there!"

"Shut up and take it off! You're not getting your stupid clothes all wet!"

"I'm not taking a bath! No! You can't do this to me, I have rights! Rights I'm tellin' ya! NOOO!!!"

"Wha-...I'm not that bad, Rin!"

"Kekekeke!" You can't stand Rin's mischievous nature at times. You don't believe you have the willpower to rape an innocent girl...you think.

"And further more...who the hell is that anyways?"

"Huh? Some smart ass mouse I met a while ago. She's a total bitch if you ask me."

"Somehow, even though I've never even heard of her, I can't help but doubt that's how she actually acts..."

"Aww, is poor little Satoshi buttmad because he's not being written like the perfect little man that he is?" Rin cheerfully and teasingly pinches your cheek as she says this with a baby voice. You feel about as unamused as you did in what she wrote. "Okay, okay, hold on, I got just the thing."

Yaaawwwn. That was a good nap. For some reason you've been getting a little too into napping on the love seat for some odd reason. You don't know why. It must be your new guest. Even though she's so energetic. Actually, that has to be precisely why. She wears you out fast, and probably herself too since she tends to give herself catnaps as well. She doesn't seem to be around right now though, oddly. Although you smell something rather delicious in the air. It just couldn't be...

"Hmmhmhmhmmm~" There she is, the small cat-eared girl standing on a small stool and preparing what appears to be dinner. For how young she looks, her abilities are very impressive.

"Chen, are you cooking?" With a little surprise, the young child turns over to you.

"Oh! Satoshi, you're awake!" You walk around the counter over to where she's cooking, she seems to be frying some of the fresh fish you had been keeping around. Chen goes back to paying attention to her activity happily. "Yes, Master Ran has always been very keen on teaching Chen on how to do things on her own~" She seems so mature, you have to wonder why you were told to take care of her like this. "Although fish is the only thing Chen really knows how to cook..."

"Are you kidding me? I love fish!"

"Really? Chen does too!" With that exclamation, the two of you hug each other tightly. "I love you Satoshi!"

"I love you too Chen!"

"...you know Rin, despite what you may think I don't actually like fish all that much."

"B-But...you always enjoy it when I cook it."

"Well...that's beside the point! The point is why do I act so pedophilic in this one?!"

"Kekekeke!" You're starting to regret giving Rin this chance now. This new hobby of hers has been nothing but trouble. "Oh come on now Satoshi, hugging a little girl is considered a crime now?"

"I'd rather not know what you intended on continuing that with."

"Master Satoshi, I brought you and Master Rin lunch." You hear Momizi's voice as she walks into the room holding a platter of several sandwiches. You think you're happier seeing Momizi herself more then the food though.

"Momizi, tell Rin to stop this nonsense at once!"

"What nonsense...?"

"Wow Satoshi, resorting to sicking your guard puppy on me? Have you lost all confidence as a man~?"

"If I did, it would be because of you."

"Er, excuse me..." Momizi seems to break up your losing battle with Rin using her own curiosity. "But uh...what is that matter, exactly?"

"Oh, perfect, I know exactly what to write now with you here Momi!" Your hand meets your face in short order, before she even begins writing.

"Oh no..."

Hmm, let's see, the laundry is done, the kitchen and bathroom is clean, everything appears to be organized...I guess there's little left to do. Perhaps I will check the Masters' room for anything that could use tidying up. Although I utterly detest having to do so for fear of stumbling across something painful I wish I had never seen...

The room seems pretty neat...in fact, it looks as if it had been tidied up already, very recently no less. I wonder if this calls for investigation...Master Satoshi has been away all day. I doubt Master Rin has the tenacity to actually clean up after herself...unless...she's preparing for-

Urkh...no, those thoughts are detrimental to my health. It is for the best that I don't think about tha-

"Why hello there, Momi."

Oh no! Master Rin has caught me in Master Satoshi's room! Well, it's not as if that's a crime or anything, but given the situation, perhaps I should be on my guard.

"Hello, Master Rin. Don't mind me, I'm jus-"

"Makin' your rounds? Checking up on me? Seeing if I had done anything...naaauuughty~?"

What...what is this? Master Rin is behaving very oddly. She is approaching me with a scary, sly look on her face. What...what does she intend on doing? Maybe she found out...

"I-I do not know what you're talking about, Master Rin. I was merely seeing if I--...!"

What is she doing? She put her hands on my chest so brazenly that it halted all thoughts within my mind and froze me on the spot. Now she is pressing herself up against me in a highly awkward fashion...

"Well you know what I think Momi? You've been bad. You've been a very bad dog."

"I-I-I have not, I have b-b-been behaving j-j-j-just fi-i-ieehhhnnn!!"

"Bad dogs need to be punished~"

As I attempted to finish my sentence she started groping and squeezing my breasts with an unreal experience behind it, as if she had not only been doing this all her life, but as if she knew exactly in what way to do it to produce the largest scale reaction out of me. It was unspeakable...!

"A-Ah, M-Master Rin, p-please sto-...a-ahh..."

"I'm sorry Momi, but discipline is something a master has to teach their pet, and you are in very much need of being taught an important lesson...~"

"N-No! Please! M-Master...Rin...!"

I was somehow powerless to stop her. The earlier molestation had paralyzed me from the neck down and she used that chance to pin me briskly to the bed behind me, quite effortlessly. Is this why she set the bed? Was this her intent all along? As her hands wandered about my helpless body I could not bear to think of why she would do such a thing to me of all people...

"No, s-stop, any...anything...but...n-n-no..."

"Come on Momi, stop lying, you're enjoying this aren't you? Such a dirty mutt you are."

"No! I am not dirty!"

"Please, look at you, you're getting wet off of just this aren't you?"

"No! Why--"

"Let me just check!"


No, she's reaching for it, my one treasured place only my chosen mate is destined for! No matter what I do, I cannot stop her...!

"Oh my..."


"Take a look Momi...you're drenched."

I look on in horror as I see the two fingers Master Rin had dipped into my underwear are now sopping wet with my own bodily fluids. I feel deeply ashamed and terrified...


"Momi...maybe this will teach you something."

"T-...Teach me...what...?'

"That you're...really...very perverted!"


With that notion, she thrusts two fingers into me at such shocking speeds that I was afraid that she would break me. But no matter how much I resist I cannot deny that my body is begging for more...

"M-...M-..." Momizi is so shocked, she can't even speak. Her face is riddled as appalled and furiously embarrassed. Her face could not possibly be any redder right now.

As much as you'd like to savor how cute that is, you're too busy being just as mortified.

"R-R-Rin...don't tell me...that you swing that way too..."

"Kahahahakekekekeke!!" Rin on the other hand, seems to be enjoying this far too much for her own good. "Oh man, the look on your faces is just priceless! Really!"

"S-Shut up Rin! Stop writing that smut right now!"

"Oh come on Satoshi, you'd love to know what I would do to that poor pup~"

"M-M-M-M-Master Rin, you wouldn't...!"

"No, she wouldn't, not as long as I'm here."

"Pfft, spoil sport." Rin regrabs her pen and looks back down at another sheet of paper. "Hmm...alright, I'll write something that doesn't involve Momi then."

"Satoshiii~ Dinner's ready!"

You hear the beautiful singing voice of your lovely wife from the kitchen as you were playing with your beloved guest. You look at the playful child in your lap.

"You ready for dinner, Chen?"

"Of course!" The young catgirl happily exclaims, grabbing onto you as you carry the tyke over to the kitchen. There, your sweetheart stands before the stove, finishing it up, dressed in an endearing yellow apron with her firey red hair done up in the cutest ponytail you could ever imagine.

"Just sit right down and it'll be right there with you~" You sit Chen down in one of the chairs at the dining table and sit yourself down as well, as your dear honey sets the delectable dinner in front of the both of you. You can't even begin to wait to dig in.

"Thank you for the meal!"

The deliciousness of the food is second to none. It's an otherworldly experience only your beautiful spouse could give you and your new dependent.

"This is really yummy Mama Orin!" Your better half smiles heartily at Chen's happy proclamation.

"I'm glad you like it~ I've been working on this recipe for a few years now."

"It certainly shows." You tell her as you're working through your feast, speaking in between bites. "This is most definitely your best cooking ever. I love you so much, Rin." Your dearly honored's flushing face grows brighter the more flattered she becomes.

"Oh man, come on now, stop it you're embarrassing me~" Looking down at the exquisite food before you, something dawns upon you.

"Jeez, you do so much for this family and yet I just sit here and get spoiled half to death..." Suddenly, you feel Rin randomly cuddling up to the side of you, quite closely.

"Oh come on Satoshi, you do plenty enough for me and you know it...~" At that moment, you feel your other side being warmly cuddled up to by yet another member of the feline persuasion.

"Chen is willing to do as much as it takes to help too!"

"Hahaha...! I guess then it can't be helped!" You can really feel yourself being heated up as the two hot bodies snuggle closer into you, sandwiching you with pure bliss.

"Mmm, so for how much you do for us, I guess we should pay you back then...?" The shimmering eyes of your mate is very enticing, just as enticing as those belonging to the young girl on your other side.

"I'm all up for that, Mama Orin...~"

"...Master Satoshi...you..."

"It's not like I'd actually go through with that! And Rin...you really do swing that way don't you..."

"Kekekeke! You worry too much Satoshi. Really, have no fear because I would not like a single female soul lay their real hands on you~" You can't believe how Rin is acting right now. Though, you take a look at Momizi and sense a small bit of hostility in her. She doesn't display it though, and immediately discards it, sighing softly.

"I am going to go start washing dishes then. I do not have time for this nonsense." She then turns and leaves out the room. Despite the stoic nature of how she said that, it felt rather off-standish to you. You then look at Rin, who seems a bit unamused.

"Geez, if she's still upset by that then she really does need to get laid."

"Rin! Have some regard for other people's feelings!" Rin just shrugs you off though, sitting back in the chair and letting her head lean back over it, looking at you upside down.

"I have plenty of regard. I mean, I let her stay here, right?"

"That's...urgh." You just merely let your face meet your palm in a slow, and calm manner to try and get over how stupid this all sounds. It's things like this that threaten the very peace of the family you've always wanted.

"...Satoshi." At least Rin is keen to pick up on when you're really upset. "L-Look, conflict between me and her is unavoidable, even you know this, but I'm trying my best to get along with her! Even if it's for similar reasons, neither me nor her would let anything threatening near you so we have a common goal in keeping you safe and happy, something I'm glad she's around for."

"Why, because I'm helpless and weak?"

"Oooh...why do you have to bring that up?" Rin is looking at you with a pouting face now. An upside down one, where her hair is obeying the proper laws of gravity. It's actually quite cute and makes you forget that you haven't quite caught up on becoming youkai just yet. So you go ahead and move onto the next thing that logically worries you.

"Alright, alright, so tell me this then. I told you to write about what you know, so why are you writing this small girl together with me when I've clearly never met her before?"

"Huh, Chen? Hmm..." Rin looks up while she's thinking, which is to say, down at the floor...you guess. Which is up to her. Wow, that's a little confusing you think you'll stop giving that too much attention. "Well, I've only met her a couple times but I guess she's sorta how I imagine what our daughter would be like."

Even though your calm demeanor has not shattered, your stance is frozen. The very idea of having children with Rin still is...

".....o-o-o-our dau-...daughter...huh?" You can barely erk it out. Your voice is cracking. You wonder how Rin can stand saying something like that so casually. She is in fact puzzled by your nervousness.

"Uhh, yeah...is something wrong?"

"Well, uhh...h-hahaha." You're trying to forget your own shakiness and try to shrug it off. "W-Well, I think that if you have inspiration for it, even if it's not something you necessarily have experience with, you shouldn't let that stop you from writing about it!" Rin just stares at you for a couple moments, and you have trouble gauging whether or not she bought it.

"...I think I know where you're going with that." She then flips herself right side up and begins one more story.

"Mooom! Big sis is being mean to me agaaaiiin!"

A peaceful talk with Rin is shattered as still rather young son runs into the room, rubbing his poor head in pain as the angry elder daughter of yours runs in after him, not too much older however.

"He's lyin'! I didn't do a single thing to him!"

"Oh man, what'd you do to him this time...?" Rin's response only serves to infuriate the little girl further.

"I just told ya that I didn't do anything!!"

"Calm down you two." You warn the children as you go over and pick up your dear daughter. She's still a child, prepubescent at that, while your son is even younger. It's been a hassle with these two, but it's been fun down the line with Rin. "You know there's never any need to hit your brother like that."

"I didn't!! Agh!" Your precious offspring flails about in your arms wildly, making it difficult for you to keep hold of her. Meanwhile, her sibling is busy crying while Rin inspects the damage.

"What did I tell you about lying to your parents?"

"I ain't lying! He just bumped his head is all!"

"That's not true!" yells the smaller boy, who's still recouping from his losses. Rin just sighs and puts him down while she gets a closer look at the girl in your arms.

"Come on now, apologize or I'm not fixing you dinner." Just like that, the once feisty child is now mortified.

"What?! You can't do that!"

"I can, because I'm your mommy." Your daughter seems pretty threatened by this as you put her down in front of her younger sibling until she looks away and forces it out.

"Fine. I'm sorry I hit you..."

"Meanie." Rin just sighs before rustling through the older child's hair.

"Come on now...did you tussle with him before you hit him or something? Your hair's a mess."

"I don't care about my hair!" The whiny girl proclaims this despite the fact that she clearly doesn't like her hair being messed with. She must like it the way she wants it. Rin just puts her hands on her hips.

"Don't be that way. If you don't pay attention to your looks then you'll never get a sweet, charming man like your father~"

"C-Come on now Rin..." You're pretty embarrassed she would say something like that in front of the kids, but that's just like her you suppose. Always teasing you to the very end.

"You mean someone weak and puny like my stupid brother? No way!"

"Well no one would like a big meanie face like you anyways!" The two exchange raspberries after the two remarks from each party. Rin knows exactly the music to sooth the savage beast however.

"If you two behave today and tomorrow, then I'll bake both of you a special cake, how's that?" Suddenly, the tension between the two completely disappears as the two hop up and down in happiness.

"YAY! Cake tomorrow!"

"Cake cake cake! I'll do anything!" Rin has to stifle a bit of laughter at seeing the two get so giddy so quickly.

"Alright, alright, calm down. Just play nice and you'll get it, okay?" As the two agree, the elder one drags the other back out of the room for another game to play. Despite their differences, the two get along exceedingly well; much like you and Rin are.

"She acts so much like you, before we got together, you know?"

"Yeah? He acts so much like you before we got together too, nice and wimpy~"

"H-Hey, what's that supposed to mean?" Rin just laughs and gives you a quick peck while leaning into you.

"Nothing, but I'm glad you've been trying to make up for your faults. Gotta do somethin' to stave off that bad luck that follows you around." You just roll your eyes, trying to shrug this off.

"Yeah, well, I'm just making the most of what hand I've been dealt with is all." With that, Rin softly pushes her head into your shoulder.

"If they dealt you me, then maybe you're luckier then we both thought..."

"...yeah, you're right. We wouldn't have had two wonderful children otherwise."

"Huh...so that's what you think our kids will be like?"

"Yeah...it would be pretty nice if they turned out like that, wouldn't it?" You look over to Rin's face quickly. She has a very forlorn look on it, this is clearly something she's serious about. It's rare that she gets emotional like this. Behind that smile is an endless sea of torment and sorrow based upon the fact that this perfect image of offspring between you and her may never come to light due to the complications inherent between the two of you genetically.

"...I'm sure they will. After all, they'll have us as their parents."

"H-Huh?" Rin seems a little surprised at your notion as you stand back up.

"We should make a note to try just as hard as they will try for us. If we do everything in our power to make it happen, I'm sure that the two of us together could do it...don't you agree?" As you give Rin a sincere smile, she returns to you with tearful expression of love.


The touching moment is then broken up by a loud clattering from outside.

"M-Master Satoshi! The pantry fell apart!"

...well, so much for that.

"Listen Rin, keep at it. I'm sure one of these days you'll write something spectacular that we can show our children down the line. They'll be proud to have us as their parents."

"...thank you, Satoshi." Rin smiles softly up at you, with one of the tears welling up in her eyes escaping down her cheek. It's an uncharacteristic part of her that you enjoy seeing once in a blue moon that it appears. It reminds you that Rin is every bit as human as you are, and that it'll always stay that way.

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"Ugh, dammit!"

"Rin, stop! You can't go on anymore!"

"Stay back Satoshi!!!"

The bodies of youkai are unique; you can decapitate, destroy and obliterate them as much as you like, but they somehow still have the perseverance to respawn their bodies after a given amount of healing.

"Why won't you fucking DIE?!"

"Low life youkai like you aren't worthy of my great power!"

"Rin! Get away! We need to run!"

"I've almost got him down! I can do this!"

Still though, youkai are not totally invincible...in particular, certain youkai are able to strike at the very soul itself...

"Ghn! GAGH!!"


"How pathetic, a single second of letting your guard down was all it took..."

When the essence of youkai is harmed in this manner, it can take just as long if not longer then a human's mortal wounds to heal...and are every bit as fatal...

"Rin...Rin, stop this, please, you-..."

"Ugh, I have to...protect you...Satoshi..."

"You're--...! No! It's not worth it!"

"That's right, whether or not you fight both of your lives are mine!"

"God damn you!"

Depleting a youkai of it's spirit, and 'killing' their soul...is akin to wiping them away from existence. They will effectively die, in mind...body...and soul.



This is bad. You can see scars everywhere all across Rin's body. Not just ordinary scars though. These ones are inflicted on the very existence of youkai, you're told. It's why you absolutely forbade Rin to engage in combat with it. But the worst case scenario came about, and she felt there was no other choice. This has, so far, resulted in the massive black, bipedal beast holding Rin in one of his gigantic claws.

"I have full control over your very life and you dare defy me?"

"Gurgh...shut...up...you piece...of fucking...TRASH!" With a loud shout, Rin causes herself to self destruct, quite possibly one of the last things you'd want to see her doing.

"Rin! No!!" Flying out of the puff of flames comes Rin, bouncing across the ground with her momentum created from her explosion. The tall behemoth had already lost his left arm in the battle, and now the majority of his right hand has been mutilated beyond repair. You wonder if this neutralizes the bigger threat present; the beast's claws.

Inspecting Rin as you run over to her lifeless body, you see deep gashes cut into her everywhere. No blood oozes out from the wounds however, instead you can see what appears to be the manifestation of her very soul threatening to just fly away. Small bubbles break free from the open wounds only to fade out of existence moments later. Somehow, the sight horrifies you more then the sight of her blood.

"You...BITCH!" The massive youkai, as if disturbed by his lack of arms for a few hours, starts rushing towards you and Rin with a vengeance. You're determined to protect your lover, but the hellcat herself has different things in mind.

"Satoshi, move...!" Rin pushes you out of the way just as she quickly generates a massive fireball and chucks it into the offensive foe's face, disorienting him by quite a bit.

"Gu--...arrgghhh!!!" With his head still a blaze, he flails about blindly. The fireball Rin threw this time seems to have had some lasting effects, unlike the fire she had been using previously, as this fire burns blue with the taint of death.

Actually, you don't like this. Rin's fire usually doesn't turn blue unless she's in critical condition. Her fire becomes infected with the scent of her own demise approaching. It's extremely rare that you ever get to see it, and despite how pretty it might look with her hands glowing a soft blue from the flames about on them and the rest of her body, for you, it's the most mortifying sight you could ever lay eyes upon.

Before you realize it though, one of the beast's wild flails suddenly tosses you aside, as you had gotten sideswiped by the broken appendage that it still had left attached to it's shoulders. Rin deftly dodges the swipe herself, but you hit the wall and look onward just in time to watch the behemoth bury it's snout right into the ground...successfully catching Rin it's mouth.


You can only look on in sheer terror as the giant starts chewing on Rin. It's most certainly the most gruesome thing you've ever had to bear witness to. All you can see is Rin's essence being spilled out of it's mouth like juicy blood. It's over. It's all over. Even the ugly bastard's teeth can do that too. There's no way she could survi-


As the massive brute screams in pain and agony, bending backwards unable to contain the spicy chaos within it's mouth, a huge pillar of blue fire erupts from within it and spews out at a wall, revealing Rin pinned to it in hideously bad shape, leaving her to simply fall to the ground lifelessly. On the other hand, you look at the behemoth, and it seems he's had enough. The heartburn was a little too much for him, and he's taking this time to stumble away, trying to find a source of relief for having all his innards toasted.

He'll get his soon enough. You know Alice is well on her way here. The hulking youkai stands no chance against her in that condition. Rin, on the other hand...

"Rin, Rin! Speak to me! Yo--...!"

You freeze up the moment you kneel down to her. You slowly move just enough to pick her up in your arms and get a good look at her. Nearly half her face, as well as a good quarter of her head, appears to be bitten off. She is completely missing her left arm, her torso is literally in shambles and her legs are twisted beyond repair. She is more like a totally gnarled doll now. An absolutely terrifying sight if you had ever seen one. Over half her body is rapidly spilling her essence, her very soul, onto the ground. The feel of it is warm, like blood, but at the same time, much less thicker and absorbent. It almost feels even more mortifying, somehow.


"Rin! Rin, do-don't talk, please, I-I just needed you to let me know you were still alive. P-Please, I--"


Your eyes widen as Rin attempts to speak to you in the absolute grave condition she's in. Her voice is strained to the core, and her body convulses in pain and sorrow. Despite all this, in that one single eye she has left, she looks at you with a soft, painful smile.

"I...couldn't...keep our....promise..."

"P-...Promise...Rin, s-stop, just stop, please, you need to rest! Y-You need to stop using energy so you can...can..."

"Live? Sato...shi...I...can't..."

You feel like you're going to cry. No, you think you are. You can see your own tears falling onto the incomplete cheek of Rin's and yet, somehow all she can do is slowly and agonizingly reach up and softly touch your cheek with her horribly damaged hand, still smiling.

"Rin...please, no..."

"I'm sorry...but...at least...I prot-...ected...y-yo--...!" At this moment Rin suddenly retreats her hand as her body convulses further, you hadn't noticed at first, the wounds on her soul have been spread, it's starting to take over her body now. Soon she won't be able to hold a physical presence. Alice won't make it in time, not even to see her die.

"Rin!! No!! Don't die on me, not now!!"

"Erk! S-Satoshi...!!" With one last breath, one last look, as her body starts dispersing, now having begun totally falling apart, Rin gives you one last parting message. "I love you..."

You didn't even get to say anything back. Or even do anything. The moment she uttered those words, you could no longer feel her presence around you. She completely vanished, without a trace. As if she had never existed to begin with.


All you do is sit there feeling helpless to it all. If only you had done something sooner. If only you tried harder to prevent something like this. If only...if only you paid more attention to Rin. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad. But you feel as if your time with her was cut far short then it should have been. You didn't have the chance to do everything you wanted to do with her...you don't think there would have been enough time in the whole world that you wouldn't have wanted with her though. With her existence depleted though, you have doubts that you would see her even in the afterlife...

My cat died recently, so naturally I felt depressed enough about it to shovel that emotion onto Orin. Sorry! Normal updates on both my stories should resume shortly though.