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5471 No. 5471
I've been wondering that myself.

However, your lack of a sage makes Aya cry. Please don't make Aya cry.

No. 5472
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...but accidentally creating a new thread while also forgetting the deletion password makes Aya cry even more. God damn it.
Admin, mod, help!
No. 5473
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I'm a gigantic asshole though. I had half a mind to sticky this. Only reason I didn't was because it's unfair to the story threads. Besides, how could I ever bring myself to delete a thread with Aya, mistake or no mistake? I'm not a monster. ...I'll delete this thread later, let me have my fun - site is too slow these days.
No. 5474
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You would sticky Aya's despair for all to see!? You fiend!

I understand, though. Aya's pretty great, regardless of her emotional state.
No. 5475
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> sticky Aya's despair for all to see!
Man, when you put it like that it's... well... I really want to expose Aya's despair, if you catch my drift.
No. 5476
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Yeek! Not like that, not like that!
No. 5477
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It's probably more like this.
No. 5478
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No! That's even worse!
No. 5479
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No, no! This one is lovely~! Attached one, too.
No. 5480
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Such terrible forum errors. I hope my last message got through!
No. 5481
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Pretty sure it's Aya.
No. 5483
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Ah, sir... I require the source for research reasons. Writing is such hard work, you know?
No. 5485
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=15190375 should be your salvation, my fellow hat-wearing gentleman.
No. 5486
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Oh, goodness.
There's better be some eventual happy sex in that story of yours, Treia! And I mean real happy sex, none of that slutty bullshit!
No. 5487
>Aya sex
>Not slutty
No. 5488
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You just don't understand her elegance.
No. 5489
What is this. Who are all you people. What's going on here!?
No. 5490
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Yeah, you heard me.
Got a problem with it?
No. 5491
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>loving sex
With a faceless male? Yuck.
No. 5492
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Ehhhh, maybe...

Inubashiri isn't faceless. He has a personality and name and stuff.
No. 5493
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If s/he displays the personality, sure. Skipping straight to the lovey-dovey sex disgusts me.
No. 5494
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Hatate is better than Aya in every way. Discuss.
No. 5495
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Oh, don't start this...
No. 5496
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aaaaa I recognize the art style but it's not on the boorus

How do you people use pixiv?! What black magicks must I study?
No. 5497
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The art of Google translate, my friend. Or alternatively, you may look on the Pixiv page for an english presentation.

Also, I have a lot of Yorihime pictures, but no Aya one. I must fix that at once.
No. 5498
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Learn how to type 東方
Learn touhou names and how to copy/paste to a search bar because fuck typing that shit
Bookmark images and use the image recommendation
Bookmark artists
Install rikaichan. Its dictionary sucks but it's better than nothing.

That's how I use it. Pixiv has an english interface these days, so it's easier than it used to be.

also, saucenao works with pixiv
No. 5499
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Thankfully, you can find the japanese names on Danbooru. That makes your job simpler.

Hell, are you sure you want to talk about it in a Aya thread? I don't have any Aya picture.
Here, have a bird.
No. 5500
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It... begins!
No. 5501
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No, you fool! You've opened pandora's box!
No. 5502
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Aya dump thread woo~
No. 5503
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Well, this thread turned out nicer than I expected it to. The attention-whoring bits notwithstanding, of course. But then again, I guess whoring of one kind or another is to be expected in an Aya thread.

Instead of deleting it, I'll be moving it to /blue/ in the coming hours.
No. 5504
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No. 5505
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Oh, damn it, really?
No. 5506
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Yes, really.
No. 5507
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I've got a bad feeling about this. But eh.
No. 5508
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Why would you have a bad feeling about this?
No. 5509
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Just a hunch. Don't think to much on it.
No. 5510
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No. 5511
Suddenly BLUE!
No. 5523
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Blue like the sky~
No. 5524
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The sky is green.
No. 5526
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Looks pretty blue to me.
No. 5527
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Oh! Oh. I get it.

I'm so slow. Aya would be ashamed.
No. 5548
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I've got to stop posting in these threads. Going to run out of good images to use between here and the story!
No. 5551
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It's not like you can ever run out of good Aya images.
No. 5552
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Yeah. By the time you finish posting them, you'll have forgotten what you posted. Infinite loop~
No. 5553
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Considering any picture with Aya in is automatically above the curve, that'll be one long loop.
No. 5554
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Even the guro?
No. 5555
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Yes. Please don't post any.
No. 5559
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I don't know. There's a certain elegance in pain, a revelation in death. You don't really know who someone is until you've seen them in the dark. You must explore all aspects of a person, even their flaws. Perhaps I am speaking in a sleep-deprived state about 'evil' iterations of characters we love and cherish, but I believe this viewpoint is vital to understanding a great character.
No. 5560
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I can see you're point, but I'd rather not have it here. You've covered it well enough with that story of yours anyway.
No. 5565
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Please don't kill anyone, Treia.
No. 5569
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Kill them all, Treia!
No. 5574
It's gonna be bird season if you all keep this up.
No. 5575
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Rabbit season!
No. 5576
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No. 5577
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No. 5578
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No. 5579
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No. 5580
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Look at all dem Tengus.
No. 5581
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I warned you. Not even Aya can dodge this.
No. 5582
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Is that a challenge?
No. 5586
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No just a fact. Aya is not faster then light.
No. 5587
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She's fast enough.
No. 5588
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She is, however, faster than the turret can mechanically track. It has to turn, you know.
No. 5589
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(You know it's funny I knew you were going to use that pic.)

Some would disagree
No. 5590
And this was the argument that could beat the Turret one. except why would she think to doge something she is unfamiliar with.
No. 5591
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I don't get it. It's just a laser.
No. 5592
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Now look what you all have done with all this arguing you've woken up to oni...
No. 5593
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You talk funny.
No. 5598
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>an oni.
No. 5599
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No. 5605
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No. 5606
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I am so excited for Symposium of Post-mysticism. More Bunbunmaru!
Kakashi Spirit's in it too, though. That's cool, but it's also a bad sign...I hope ZUN doesn't keep trying to make Aya completely unlikable.
No. 5608
Mmm? What are you talking about? Am I missing something important?
No. 5609
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Be informed!
No. 5610
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Taoism > every other "religion".
Toyosatomimi will rise and shine, and we will know true happiness again.
No. 5619
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I'm honestly surprised that there's no story with Aya as the MC.
>You are Aya, newspaper contest's coming up, go find some news.
It seems so simple.
No. 5620
Too simple. It was good when THP was new, but now, you can't write a story without a good plot.
The time where one could just walk around in Gensokyo is over. Now, it's time for complicated plot, antagonists and real backstory.

Beside, that start reminds me MS Paint Adventures, and that's not good thing (I mean, they are awesome and stuff, but there's just too many similars fanfics).
No. 5622
You wake up in Gensokyo. What will you do?
No. 5623
Turn the pumpkin into a helmet.
No. 5624
Shut the fuck up. I'm sick of seeing you repeat that "Simple stories were good back then, but" line. They're still good. They never stopped being good. You are the one that changed.
No. 5625
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I'd rather be Hatate. Aya seems like a better antagonist.

Stalker Hatate might work as one.
No. 5626
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Shut the fuck up!
I wasn't here when the website started, and quite frnakly, I read some of the old stories, only to find them awful. I only called them "good" by respect, and because without them, THP wouldn't be here. Just compare Waking up in Gensokyo with, I dunno, Fragmentation of Memories. Differents readers, differents reaction, and one story is good (protip: it's not the former).
The stories you liked are now awful by today's standards, fucking deal with it.
And if you try to convince someone on the Internet, ya better be polite.

No. 5627
No, I think he meant that the standard for what qualifies as a "good" story on this site has raised exponentially since the olden days.

For example, let's compare MiG with The Game. The Game wins at every category, be it writing, plot, or characterization.
No. 5628
What about this tiny little insignificant factor called fun?
No. 5629
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Ah, pancake. Forgot to sage, and made Aya cry.
No. 5630
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I have fun when I'm throwing oil in a flamewar. Or when I watch a Fortress descending into madness, cannibalism, and bloodbath.
No. 5631
"Fun"? Good sir, we're here not to have "fun"! We're here only to read the best of the best of Touhou fanfiction.
No. 5632
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You know, I asked many touhou fans. Most of them agree to say that a fanfic containing OCs is therefore a shitty fanfic.

What's my point? Tastes are personal. I myself hate Lion's stories, because they're too long, but I know that many people here enjoy his stories, BECAUSE they are long.

Why am I saying that? Because I just wanted to use that picture of Jack Nick Thompson staring at your soul.
No. 5633
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>Jack Nick Thompson
>Nick Oleson
Get it? That's funny, isn't it?
No. 5634
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Good is subjective. Deal with it.
No. 5635
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Exactly what I said. Good is subjective.
Here, have an Aya picture.
No. 5636
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No, you said... fuck it, this argument is dumb.

Someone write that Aya story.
No. 5637
Fragmentation of Memories is good?... maybe the first half but after that it spiral out of control
No. 5638
Fine, the people have changed, not the stories. The point stands that stories in the old style are no longer enjoyed by a majority. Tastes have evolved.
No. 5639
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Oh god, I didn't mean to start such an argument.
Calm down! Look, legs!
No. 5640
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>The point stands that stories in the old style are no longer enjoyed by a majority.

So what? What does it even matter what the majority does or does not enjoy? If someone wants to write a story like that, and there's a chance of anyone else enjoying it, regardless of their numbers, why shouldn't they go for it?

This isn't a popularity contest, here, and there's nothing wrong with doing something that will only appeal to a small niche.

Besides, just because a story starts with a simple concept/premise, that doesn't mean it can't grow in complexity as time goes on. What starts as a simple story about a reporter trying to find a scoop for a contest could go some very interesting places.
No. 5642
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Tried really hard to find a good and safe Hatate/Aya picture, and that's the best I found.
No. 5643
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Feathers everywhere. Disgusting.
No. 5644
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What's wrong with feathers? They're fluffy and soft and nice.
No. 5646
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You. You have my funstick.
No. 5647
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Yuugi would like that back now.
No. 5648
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That screw always makes me cringe.
No. 5649
The issue is how you execute the story as most newbies try to post just a generic execution.

Older stories are less refined than newer stuff if not outright flawed (SDM LA had some glaring flaws looking back). Even long running stories have crude starts compared to now.

Indeed as even past stories have found firmer footing, though the transition is sometimes flawed (MiG), but that's more due to inexperience than lack of skill.
No. 5650
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Why you always gotta act like you're a THP expert? It's a little annoying.
No. 5651
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No. 5652
You know what, I have a solution for all the problems on this site.

First, turn this site into a forum. There's no point in keeping it as an imageboard.

Second, before you can post your stories here, you must be approved by a group of experienced writers on this site so that the quality of the stories posted here remains high. You must write a short first to be read by that group in order for them to know if you're good enough for this site or not.
No. 5653

What? No.
No. 5654
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Aya is against all forms of censorship. She's a reporter, you know!
No. 5655
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That's the worst idea I've ever heard on this site.
No. 5656
But, it's for the greater good!
No. 5657
Not really as most of the older writers have stopped reading the site and would likely be prone to favoritism or apathy.

It wouldn't do a thing to solve a major problem with the site: the overt elitism poisoning the spirit of people here. I point this out as in the end it's just a fanfiction site with some rather talented writers and if you're writing here for some other reason besides fun, then you're doing it for the wrong reason.
No. 5658
Sometimes, I don't even know the meaning of that word.
No. 5659
Yeah, we're just lucky that Fanfiction.net doesn't allow CYOA stories. Heck, look at that Palingenesia story. It has no reason at all to be on this site. It could have been posted at that site, possibly achieving a legendary status there amidst all of the other mediocre stories.
No. 5660
HY and Angry Desu still frequent IRC though.
No. 5661
I have fun reading, participating, and causing shitstorms. Is that wrong?
No. 5662
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Yeah, god forbid we have to rub shoulders with undesirables.
No. 5663
Is this sarcasm?
No. 5664
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Who cares. Disregard comments, post Aya.
No. 5665
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No. 5666
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No. 5667
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Imagedumps aren't any fun without comments.
No. 5668
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No. 5669

If I must~


I'd let Aya hug my face.

If you know what I mean.


I'd let Aya pose for me.

If you know what I mean.


I'd let Hatate suck on a-

Who am I kidding? It's just a lovely Hatate. Plus some Aya.
No. 5670
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There's also this. Minor issues (BREASTS SLIGHTLY TOO BIG, WOULD NOT FUCK), but a very lovely hug pillow. If I lived on my own and had the money...

Maybe. Maybe.
No. 5671
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Now you're getting it~

I'd follow Aya around and make a pillow out of her feathers. That's exactly what I mean.
No. 5672
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I don't know about that, I'm not sure Aya would provide enough feathers by molting unless you're making a very small pillow. Rather make a pile of them and roll around in them. Yes, yes...
No. 5673
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Trust me (I'm a zoology student) when I say that given as Aya only has wings that are feathered, you'll be following her for a VERY long time without any return for that feather pillow of yours. You might as well wait for her to die/kill her and pluck her wings.
No. 5674
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So fluffy!
No. 5675
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Being around Aya is its own reward.
No. 5676
>breasts too big

No that seems about right for her and I've seen hug pillows where she had bigger ones (still nice).
No. 5677
File 132406002664.jpg - (621.70KB , 1200x800 , 9df5094f9599d898f0998c37a1a2dda2.jpg ) [iqdb]
Perhaps. I like my women with a little smaller breasts. Have some nice monochrome drawings.
No. 5678
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Ayayaya, got hurt...
No. 5679
File 132406010882.jpg - (1.78MB , 1438x2000 , 57cbdfb349d6645a99f91e4cca3250b6.jpg ) [iqdb]
What are you doing with that Aya? You're a crow tengu, not a shrine maiden. That background doesn't even fit!
No. 5680
File 132406614218.jpg - (457.92KB , 740x1036 , 1267659406227.jpg ) [iqdb]
Shrines are fun, and they usually have news.
No. 5681
File 13240702384.jpg - (343.26KB , 700x916 , 9ce7529b2a83a6076650be5a771357c0.jpg ) [iqdb]

That style seems so familiar, but I can't place it... source?
No. 5682
If I write for fun, I would never try to improve the quality of my writing. Is that what you want?
No. 5687
File 132407068629.png - (267.25KB , 600x600 , 1314533079170.png ) [iqdb]
Actually, on second lookover, it looks like Hyudora. I don't see it anywhere in his stuff, though.
No. 5689
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This reminds me of Pasteltel.
Oh, how I hope he draws more...his last picture ended on a really bad note.
No. 5693
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Yes. If you aren't having fun or the promise of fun, why bother?
No. 5700
Sounds like Hatate is more your pace then.

Who to say you can't do both? If you don't write for fun, you're very likely to quit as "attention" or "art" are rarely good enough reasons to sustain a writer's will.
No. 5702
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Aya having big breasts is silly. She's supposed to be sleek and aerodynamic and fast-looking.
She's sexy as hell, but doesn't need massive tits to be so.
No. 5703
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..although, she could be well endowed and uses whatever she does to hide her wings half the time to hide her breasts. Or something.
I could go either way, really.
No. 5705
File 132414037312.jpg - (193.77KB , 1001x500 , 13589025.jpg ) [iqdb]
Aya flies because magic. Big tits make her go faster.
No. 5706
Blatant lies
No. 5707
Sorry, storm near, no internet for a few day, missed that.

>Second, before you can post your stories here, you must be approved by a group of experienced writers on this site so that the quality of the stories posted here remains high. You must write a short first to be read by that group in order for them to know if you're good enough for this site or not.
Oh hell no.
Just for you to know, the Pony fanbase already does that. And that's not very effective, since it basically turns the moderation into a cock sucking contest.

Saged because probably too late.
No. 5709
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Wings beat magic.
No. 5710
Agreed. Dear Christ no do not endorse this. Eventually, any and every version of that sort of thing turns into "we won't let this guy write because we're butthurt about things he said/the types of stories he writes/there's a cloud in the sky today". No matter how great the original crew of moderators is, it always goes to shit. Always.

Besides, we have tools enough to drive out bad writers- combined scorn and reminding them that they suck. Just at least tell them why they suck. Maybe they'll learn.
No. 5711
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Man, this is the thread that just keeps on giving. Made the right call in saving Aya.

A forum with registration is a great idea. Not only would we expand our userbase with the facility of quick and painless posts by anyone but it would also give us a very-needed jump on quality control. And the vetting with a group of writers? It's brilliant. I'll go round up a few from the large selection of those who are active and read enough to pass judgment on their peers. And no, I'm not stating the obvious even though others have stated my case for me already because I'm bored.
No. 5712
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Not sure if irony....
No. 5713
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Ear nibbling~
No. 5714
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Lodsa money Aya
No. 5715
The term is sarcasm.
No. 5716
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There's a disappointing lack of Akyuu in this website.

Thankfully, I'm here to fix this! By hijacking an Aya thread! Or dying while trying! Most probably the latter!
No. 5717
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No "probably" about it.
No. 5718
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You wouldn't take advantage of an Aya thread, would you?
No. 5719
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Those wings are magic.
No. 5721
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Wing magic beats magic.
No. 5722
Perhaps the elitism is justified as there are some stories here that are better than mainstream literatures, like Harry Potter.
No. 5723
If I write just for fun, why would I post it online? Heck, why write at all? I could just "write" it in my head.
No. 5724
We could just use the Cabal as the moderators, you know. They've been hanging around the site for a long time. I don't think that people like Glasnost, Fell, and Treia will ever "go to shit" just like you said.
No. 5727
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Oh, I myself trust Glasnost. Problem is, does he have time to do that kind of shit, sentencing writers and stuff?
I want to remind you that Glasnost is the kind who's translating most doujins, and he's very late on his own story.

People can trust Glasnost to say if a story is good or bad, but I will never trust an inactive writer. I mean, last update? 10/12/14. ONE YEAR AGO.
I'm not even sure we can still call him a writer.

But I digress.
Thing is, we don't need 'good' writer to moderate that thing. We need respected writers. In other words, no arrogant asshat like Demetrious, no lazy writer like Treia, no inactive writer like Glasnost.
Because what will happen if one writer doesn't accept the judgement? He'll say stuff like "your point is invalid, you're not writing", or "I'm writing faster than you, you're just jealous".

What we need is a perfect writer. And that doesn't exist. Therefore, that idea is just retarded, and can and WILL fail.
No. 5729
I would like to plead mentally insane and point to /eientei/ as a self-insert

No. 5730
>no arrogant asshat like Demetrious, no lazy writer like Treia, no inactive writer like Glasnost.

So... we need the guy that writes "Do the Right Thing"?
No. 5731
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If sharing your stories isn't fun, don't share them. This isn't rocket science.
No. 5732
Instead of bans, he'd just satirize bad users.
No. 5733
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And what's wrong with that? We need someone to explain what's wrong with stories. We don't need a mister happy-trigger going around and banning people for fun.
In before "yeah, teruyo already does that".
No. 5734
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I wish moderation were fun. It would provide some degree of satisfaction to what is otherwise a thankless and lonely job taking hundreds of hours with mostly imperceivable results.

For fun I do other things; Play games, create lame april fool's jokes, write stupid shorts, save silly little mistakes like this thread and then encouraging a little fun by showcasing love for Aya. You know, things like that.

Some of what you're saying is in the recommendations thread but if you want to critique a story the best way to do it is in its own thread. Note that 'critique' does not empower you to go on and on at length about all the flaws you see unless maybe the author is into that kind of thing (It's no secret that a lot of writers here are hard M).

If you want to do an in-depth review of stories for your own benefit (and whomever may care) I suggest creating a thread here or in /gensokyo/ dedicated to people identifying strengths and weaknesses and trying to guide people to do better. The thing is though is that works best when it's consensual. Good luck finding someone who actually takes the time to read most stories and isn't a loon though.
No. 5736
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No. 5737
What is this sanity you speak of?
No. 5738
>hard M
What's this?
No. 5739
File 132428529619.jpg - (1.69MB , 1200x1094 , 23751547.jpg ) [iqdb]
means hard masochist
No. 5741
File 132429917258.png - (644.13KB , 635x900 , OH YOU.png ) [iqdb]
If I have to create a review thread, I think I'll do it on /blue/. I mean, /blue/ is already more or less Anonymous' lair to insult bad writers, it won't hurt to have a 'nice' review thread here.
No. 5754
File 132437135886.jpg - (196.26KB , 1512x1051 , 1272656162653.jpg ) [iqdb]
I wonder why Reimu and Aya didn't take off as well as the other SA pairing. Like, say, Marisa and Nitori.
No. 5755
Well, if writers are supposed to write only for fun, that means they can update whenever they want.
No. 5756
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Are you sure you looked hard enough?
No. 5757
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Not hard enough, no sir, not hard enough...
No. 5758
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Nopity nope nope

Also, peekaboo.
No. 5759
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Last one. Young love is so thrilling.
No. 5760
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Is this supposed to be a bad thing?
No. 5761
Ever heard of moderation, aspie?

One can stick to a schedule and still have fun as well it's easier to keep to a schedule when you're having fun.
No. 5762
This site is SA now?
No. 5763
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No. 5764
>not fun
You're a sad excuse for a human if you don't enjoy getting better at stuff. What's more, there might be something wrong with your brain, because it's one of the basic human mental mechanisms to enjoy self-improvement.
Any writer who says he/she doesn't want to get better for his/her own sake is either:
a) fucking nuts
b) fucking other kinds of fruits
or c) lying and just complaining that he/she can't get as much attention as the other writers without putting effort into their writing

There. Just thought I'd throw this out here.
No. 5765
File 132440591461.jpg - (908.11KB , 1035x1062 , aya does not appear displeased at this turn of eve.jpg ) [iqdb]
Aya hates writing.
No. 5767
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This. Is why video games are popular.
I mean, most video games are casual, but back in the days, finishing a game was a challenge! You could be proud of it!
And the key to finish a game is self-improvement.

So I think that >>5682 is a cheater one. Probably the kind of player that, if confronted to a difficult level/enemy, will rather cheat or ragequit, rather than taking that as a challenge.
Makes me wonder why he's here, touhou games aren't exactly casual.

I don't have Aya, so have this instead.
No. 5770
>implying that to be a good gamer, one must be a hardcore gamer
Most gamers have a life you know.
No. 5771
Ad hominem, much?
No. 5772
Please, don't do the implying thing here.
Further that's pretty clearly not what the person you're "quoting" was suggesting. Hardcore or casual in reference to the gamer him/herself aren't relevant terms in this instance. I think barring those that the statement applies to all gamers, hardcore or otherwise can agree that being unable to play a game without cheating at it is a strong indicator toward you being bad at it.
No. 5773
File 132442410351.jpg - (99.01KB , 629x346 , aya and momiji - ace writing team.jpg ) [iqdb]
No. 5774
File 132442429767.jpg - (206.52KB , 750x639 , oh it here again.jpg ) [iqdb]
you mean it didn't?

Also did you know omelets are made from eggs


Lets get back to Aya chat. look have this... Oh ow that's got hurt.
No. 5776
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If anyone likes writing in that team, it's Momiji. Aya feels articles are only useful for signifying how important an incident is by filling pages.
No. 5777
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More nonsense. If Aya didn't like writing at all, she wouldn't be running a newspaper.
No. 5778
File 132442791510.jpg - (450.07KB , 1103x1275 , cirno10783802.jpg ) [iqdb]
She likes photography and being a nuisancereporter. The actual article writing, not so much.
No. 5779
File 132443353244.jpg - (412.59KB , 637x900 , 1272719201153.jpg ) [iqdb]
Bah. Bah I say!
No. 5780
File 132443494920.png - (29.26KB , 379x256 , Ta gueule imbécile.png ) [iqdb]
She likes writing! Her diary is so filled with fictions it's awesome!

What do you mean, it's a newspaper?
No. 5781
Wait, aren't you an attention-whoring writer yourself?
No. 5782
File 132443725476.jpg - (114.15KB , 500x550 , 7270354_p1.jpg ) [iqdb]
Aya rejects reality and makes her own all the time. You're in good company~
No. 5783
He's not always talking about his stories. That's different. He's just a tripfag.
An attention whore is like "HEY GUISE COME AND SEE MY STORY AND COMMENT PLEASE BUT ONLY GOOD REVIEW OKAY ;)". YAF is more like "Hey I'm YAF and I'm saying nonsense, deal with it".
No. 5784
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I wish I could write with my feet.
No. 5785
File 132444780874.png - (58.70KB , 265x317 , momiwoof.png ) [iqdb]
There's a difference?

Pic unrelated
No. 5786
Is there anyone here who ever said that?
No. 5787
Not like that no...
No. 5788
File 132447331441.jpg - (511.27KB , 1000x740 , 23635062.jpg ) [iqdb]
That depends on whose attention it is.
No. 5790
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Thank god, never on THP. But that was the general idea.
Point is: if you call YAF an attention whore because he's using his trip, you can say the same thing about Tsurupettan, and also Treia, since both of them are using their trips outside of their stories thread. Oh, and Ddyk too, since he posted on /blue/ with his trip.
No. 5791
You're not helping your argument with most of those examples there.
No. 5792
Au contraire!
If your plan is to call every namefag/tripfag an attention whore, you're deeply wrong.
No. 5793
Improving your writing ain't easy, you know. Most writers on this site only write in their free time, just as a hobby. You can't expect them to train like 5 hours per day just to improve their writing skills.

At least J.K Rowling actually made money from her writing, not like the writers on this site. Heck, even Stephenie Meyer is more successful than anyone on this site.
No. 5794
File 132453074597.jpg - (253.09KB , 800x506 , 9739562.jpg ) [iqdb]
>defining success as profit
No. 5795
Take it easy
No. 5797
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No. 5799
What the actual fuck? You can't “train” writing. Or, well, I suppose you can, but it isn't going to do much shit, other than make you feel like writing is a chore and the worst thing since mosquitos.
You don't improve your writing by “training;” you improve it by:
1) reading other writers' shit and imitating it
2) practice, just writing your own shit whenever possible
and most importantly, 3) going back and reviewing your own shit
When you're done with a piece, stop and go back. Yes. Go back. To the beginning. Take each paragraph and rewrite it quickly while looking at the original version. I guarantee it's going to look better then. That's the effort I meant in my previous post. What I do is go to the extreme of deleting ALL of a done piece and rewriting it from scratch. You don't have to do that, but you SHOULD go back and review it. Some writers will slap their thoughts down and call it a day. That's bad. You don't have to drill yourself learning new phrases or constructions. Just go back and bloody review your own work. If you like writing any, you'll start noticing ways to improve it almost automatically.
I'm not a good writer. Never were. But I'm a fairly decent-ish rewriter. You can be, too.
No. 5800
>3) going back and reviewing your own shit

Then there's no reason to publish your writing on a site such as this if you are your own best critic, correct? And if you admit you arent a great of a writer, then why are you bitching about people not taking your advice? If I said I was a bad salesman, would anyone take me seriously?

Fuck i ran outta aya
No. 5802
>Then there's no reason to publish your writing on a site such as this if you are your own best critic, correct?
Please tell me you're just pretending to be daft. Otherwise I might be forced to assume all Aya fans are dumb as shite.
>And if you admit you arent a great of a writer, then why are you bitching about people not taking your advice?
Where in the blazes did I ever complaing about somebody not taking my writing advice? What's more, why WOULD I complain about something like that? It's YOUR business whether you want to take it or not. Your acceptance of it matters to me about as much as an earthquake in the middle of the Pacific ocean.
No. 5804
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Don't those cause tsunamis?
No. 5805
Yeah, but I'm in the middle of continental Europe, so I don't give a damn.
No. 5806
Wow, you are one unsympathetic jerk.
No. 5807
One could have a proofreader look at it, take notes of the mistakes, and learn from them.
No. 5808
File 132457882682.png - (680.40KB , 1200x920 , SHOUT MY NAME.png ) [iqdb]
That's why writers who aren't using proofreader (cough cough hartmann cough cough) cannot improve.

I am out of crow, so have a phoenix.
No. 5809
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How the hell can you run out of Aya?
No. 5810
File 132457984213.jpg - (763.06KB , 1200x1200 , 9163120.jpg ) [iqdb]
You're conflating language skills with creative writing skills. They're completely different things.
No. 5811
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I've set my mind on more important issues. How to rid the world of all monsters, for one. I think it might be just as well to start here.

This is now a Mokou thread.
No. 5812
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All shall burn.
No. 5813
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No. 5814
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Mokou isn't a very good monster hunter.
No. 5815
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Hey, hey, none of that. This is crow territory.
No. 5816
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Don't make me destroy you.
No. 5817
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No, really. Don't do this. There's plenty space around here for Mokou and Friends. There's no need to fight.
No. 5818
File 132458363243.png - (554.77KB , 600x800 , Mokou is better than that crow.png ) [iqdb]
Do you know Mokou likes Aya?
Because she tastes good.
No. 5819
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No. 5821
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No. 5822
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really now
No. 5823
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It's all just birds to me
No. 5826
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The best bird.
No. 5827
File 132459607081.jpg - (1.16MB , 1200x857 , bird team7.jpg ) [iqdb]
Birds are pretty great.
No. 5844
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Aya is a bit busy at the moment
No. 5847
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there is Mokou in this pic too
No. 5848
No. 5852
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I know Tengus aren't really birds, but...

Does Aya crow?
No. 5860
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In my dreams she does!
No. 5861
File 132469922832.jpg - (194.99KB , 600x848 , excitement.jpg ) [iqdb]

A soft whimper escaped her lips as she found herself in an exciting situation. Waves of pleasure shot from her groin, threatening to drown her whole being in ecstasy.

"More!" she pleaded. Pride and shame were entirely concepts to her at that stage. All she wanted was to be engulfed in passion.

Her request was granted with the utmost expediency. A tsunami of feeling began to form as her breath became labored. Her body shook in synchrony with every caress and thrust. She undid the final buttons on her blouse herself, not thinking nor caring about decency - just of freeing herself of anything that could constrict her lust. The wild display grew bolder as she grappled her lover, bringing the two bodies closer. Nails sank into the other back, nearly drawing blood, as she gave herself over fully.

"I... can't anymore!" She cried with reckless abandon. The assault was merciless and saturated her senses. Finally, with one final thrust she collapsed and her body convulsed. "C-caaww," Her mind couldn't even think of any words as her back arched and she lost all her senses. For a few minutes afterwards she lay completely still, absolutely spent. Her perspiring body could only make her chest rise up and down as it recovered from the violent episodes. A smile found its way onto her lips even as her eyes had yet to recover focus - soft calls of affection escaped her intermittently. Those love calls were the sure sign of a satisfied animal.
No. 5862
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Ehhhh...nah. Not working for me.
No. 5863
File 132469949831.jpg - (611.13KB , 1000x883 , aya music1.jpg ) [iqdb]
What about singing? Can Aya sing?
No. 5865
File 132471173123.jpg - (120.09KB , 713x800 , 20deecfe4d3db9e283445460b1c6cd34.jpg ) [iqdb]

What have you done?