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As per >>5576 's request, I put up a thread for the work I have done so far on 04U's recent work featuring Letty.

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That's it for now.

The rest are in the works.
No. 5756
Delicious. Please continue.
No. 5767
>>5748
>04U's recent work featuring Letty.
Oh my god.

Yes.

YES.

[/b]YES.[/b]

I love 04U (even despite his fucking up Toshima 2 with tiny heads) so very much, and Letty as well.
No. 5768
>>5767
Fucked my bold tag up and then my password didn't work for some reason. Oh well.

KEEP TRANSLATING.

(Please.)
No. 5781
Good so far.

Are you going to skip Letty's moaning (>>5754, >>5755, for example)? If so, make sure not to skip the few actual words she slips into those.
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>>5781
I'll do the moaning bubble once i figure out a good font to be used.

If not, I might skip a few.
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>>5787
I usually find Mouth Breather BB, Another, or Mighty Zeo to be effective. Adding text-warping effects and altering font sizes and styles as needed usually works well enough.
No. 5807
CGRascal just released his version, as expected.
Also as expected, he made some glaring errors in his translation.

Still up for finishing this one out?
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>>5807
I'm still going.
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>>5810
Awesome. Looking forward to the next installment.
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>>5810

Thank you for all the hard work. I trust your translations more than the other person's.
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>>5816
For the record, I didn't do the translation, I merely did the editing it, provided by >>5449.

Script is at >>5494 btw.

Reboot due to added SFX to minor repairs.
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And that was it. QC please, and please spot any minor errors I missed during the editing.

Archived doujin coming soon - if my ISP isn't being a sloth.
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>>5818
Uh, you posted the original page instead of the translated one.

>>5821
Didn't erase the original text in the last box.

Other than that, looks good.
No. 5839
QC:

>>5818
Did you post the raw page there on purpose?

>>5821
Forgot to clean the Japanese off of the bottom-right narration box.

>>5832
Panel 3: The lines on the bottom row of balloons need to be centered in the balloon more.
Also, I'd suggest adding a white stroke effect (2 or 3 pixels) on any of the black-on-white text that touches the edge of its balloon or the underlying image. This provides a little more contrast for the text, making it easier on the eyes to read it.

>>5833
First panel: Change "You're really..." to "You're actually..." to avoid repetition.

>>5835
Forgot to black out the Japanese text on the third of Letty's word-bursts in panel 1.
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>>5839
First of all, cripes. I think I messed up the folder when I was uploading the pic.
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>>5818

I, uh, accidentally clicked the wrong number. Be right back, wiping egg from face.
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Second, oversight fix'd.
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Edited as suggested by suggester.
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Oversight fixed.

Anything else?
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If nobody has any further issues, I think that'll do nicely.
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>>5823
"Just as expected, from a delusion of mine" should be "Just as expected from a delusion of mine".
>>5827
"Yeah! How's that!" should be "Yeah! How's that?!"

Also, I'm probably the only person in the world who cares about this, but you use both "?!" and "!?" as terminal punctuation. That's fine in the original, since the meaning of punctuation in general is rather hazily defined in Japanese, but in English, it would probably be better to pick one (I prefer "?!") and stick with it.

Other than those nitpicks, excellent work, both of you.
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>>5851
Technically, aren't "?!" and "!?" both illegal punctuation combinations? even the interrobang isn't official.
No. 5856
>>5853
'Technically illegal' and 'official' are lies, foisted upon you by clueless teachers and stodgy greybeards who think that languages are best kept under glass, where the filthy masses can't sully them. Any statement, word, or morpheme that is comprehensible by the majority of speakers of a language is 'valid' in that language. "?!" meets that criteria, and, on top of that, has a novel utility which cannot be replicated through other means; that's good enough for the people who actually study language, and it's good enough for me.

This has been your anti-prescriptivist rant of the day.
/at/ - 18+ Touhou/Linguistics
No. 5858
>"Just as expected, from a delusion of mine" should be "Just as expected from a delusion of mine".
>"Yeah! How's that!" should be "Yeah! How's that?!"
These are artifacts from reading it in the Japanese speaking rhythm, and punctuating it accordingly.
Now that you bring it up, they do look a bit odd. Thanks.

>Also, I'm probably the only person in the world who cares about this, but you use both "?!" and "!?" as terminal punctuation. That's fine in the original, since the meaning of punctuation in general is rather hazily defined in Japanese, but in English, it would probably be better to pick one (I prefer "?!") and stick with it.
Ah, now this, I must disagree on.
In comics, there are effectively two sorts of interrobangs, each for different tones of voice.

!? is for exclamatory questions: questions which demand an answer, but were stated in an exclamatory tone of voice.
Examples:
"What did you say!?"
"WHERE ARE YOU!?

?! is for rhetorically inquisitive exclamations. These are exclamations phrased as questions, with a loud, insistent, or demanding tone.
Examples:
"Who the hell do you think I am?!"
"Where is your God now?!"

>>5856
I find that there is an interesting balance that must be struck between the points of "language is a living thing that evolves" and "there must be rules and standards". Too far to one end, and people invent new words, phrases, and pronunciations so rapidly that communication breaks down and the language becomes useless; too far to the other, and you end up with arbitrary rules that seldom apply to the real world.

I generally keep to the tack that one must know fully what the rules are and where they apply before he has the right to break them. Stick to that, and violations of the "rules" of any given language become witty and artistic, rather than immature and annoying.
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>>5851
Heads up, edited page coming in hot~!
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If that's just about it, I'll post a link within one hour.
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http://www.mediafire.com/?ldr0mygctmw

Sorry for the broken promise, MF being a b1atch for quite a while.
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>>5863
Ah, good. Very good. This turned out quite well, indeed.
No. 5868
>>5867
We should work together again on other doujins.

what do you think?
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>>5868
Sure. I'm up for suggestions. Bear in mind that there are some things I just won't want to deal with, though.
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>>5873
I'm trying to look up anything that doesn't require much work.

Might be later.
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>>5875
It's not the difficulty that's at issue for me; it's the content.

There are four categories of material that I simply will not work on: guro, scat, loli, and rape.

It just so happens that loli and rape are two of the more frequent types of ero doujinshi seen in the Touhou fandom.
No. 5894
>>5883
When you say no loli, is that based on tone of the comic (e.g. lots of ダメお兄ちゃん and こどもまんこ) or strictly physiology (or, as I prefer to call it, Australian-rules loli)? There are a few Remilia doujin out there that manage to avoid that exploitative feeling and are downright tasteful, despite the fact that she's still short and flat in nature.
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>>5894
I prefer not to set hard-and-fast standards on that, as it depends largely on the content and art style. I tend to go on a case-by-case basis for that.

Top-of-my-head example: if Remilia's spouting her usual aristocratic lines, but is wearing a randoseru, it certainly loses the maturity aspect.
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http://www.mediafire.com/?wgt1mzn5zu4

Well this one doesn't seem to be hard to edit. If you're free on making the script please tell me.
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>>5846
Definitely the best I've read so far. The sad part at the end really moved me. I will never see Letty Whiterock as I did before ever again. God bless the man who made this doujin.
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Looks like I can re-use this thread to post the typesetted pages of Extend Party 2 I done so far.

Do note that I received the translation note and cleaned pages from someone else, so if you spot an error in the words and wordings please tell me.

Stay tuned.
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Alright, time to get this sorted out. Missing pages are being worked on by me.
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That's it for now. i'll post more sooner.
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>>9431
Oops, didn't notice that bit of text wasn't cleaned. I'll send the typesetted page off to get that bit cleaned.

>>9424
All of a sudden the Scarlet ...
That'll push all the text over to the right a bit, so I'd drop aphrodisiac down and remove the hyphen as well.
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>>9402
Thanks.
Where did you get the translation from?
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>>9440
Saha
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>>9479
I feel like we've missed some critical details in the course of events.
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>>9483
Check the page numbers. He's not going in order.
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I'll post the missing pages when they are done.
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The rest of the pages will be available later.
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If you could put them all in a zip I would gladly carry your children.

Only over distances of less than 5 kilometers, mind you, and only within the bounds of the UK, but the offer is sincere and open. Well done!
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>>9507
I'll rar them once everything is finished. I suggested that Zero post them here because of his slow internet, and so that people could critique the work in progress.
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Where are the flandre bits. I can't fap to that.
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>>9525

>Where are the bits drawn by Takaku-ya, I can't fap to those.

Fixed.
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Alright mates, here comes the second batch.

But first, a fix to >>9424
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And then >>9434
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And the rest of the missing pages.
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>>9429
>>9431
Dual-wielding wombs! YUKARI IS AWESOME.
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That's the last one.

>>9508
Name the archive to (C78) [Takaku-ya] Extend Party 2 [ENG] [A-Trans].
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>>9611
>>9587
>gan-graped
Please use gang-raped. gan-graped just sounds ridiculous. I'm pretty sure it only appears on those two pages, but it appears twice on >>9611.

>>9631
Missing a bubble
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>>9636
Gang-graped sounds like something out of http://www.touhou-project.com/at/res/8165.html
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>>9640
>>9636
The best.

>>9632
So on topic, linebreak gang-raped where the hyphen is meant to be, as already pointed out.

>>9585
"I love master's dick" and stuff, the text should not be positioned along the top. It should be centered.

That's all I have to say at the moment. It's a little difficult to read out of order.
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>>9641
>>9636
Okay, I got it down. Now uploading the fixed ones.
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>>9641
All of the typeset files.
http://www.mediafire.com/?z61d144ty74w89g

Please don't cross post this anywhere; wait for the final version to be released.
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If everything's all clear, raise the flag.
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>>9648
I don't see anything else; unless someone else adds something I'll post the full archive tomorrow afternoon.
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>>9649
Maybe change Remy to Remi
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>>9653
'Remy' is just on one page, according to the txt: >>9629
I'm fine either way.
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Posted.
>>9655
No. 9665
Is there a sequel out yet?
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>>9665
A sequel to what?
No. 9668
>>9667
I'd say he wants Extend Party 3. When is that even due?
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>>9668
>えくすてんどぱ~てぃ~
>DATE: 2008-05-25

>えくすてんどぱ~てぃ~2
>DATE: 2010-08-14

I'd say in about 2 years.
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>>9669

Good, it'll be two years before we read any more of that kind of shit again.

Not that the translation is bad. If fact, it's very good. But the content of the work leaves much to be desired.
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>>9708
It's not your thing, we get it. Can you kindly shut up? Go read this one.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/wrqiu4qnuj5/Takaku-ya_-_Touhou_Little_Girls_Dance.zip